| "Innocence Reborn" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good! I really like this! :D
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Neko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's more like a 9.5, but anyway....
I've taken note the spelling and other things have improved greatly. There were still some grammar switches here and there, but minor, rare, and I'm too lazy right now to point them out. _^_!
Either way, good chapter, and further more, mm.org finally looks right to me!! The pictures are back and things seem to load faster and I finally got another chapter out of this story!!! I'm a happy kitty~ Chii!! ^^v!! Keep up the good work, girls, and I'll keep coming.
~Neko-chan |
Reviewed By: Neko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Veyr simple here. The story could do with a going over for spelling, but that's a minor detail.
It is so adorable. But poor Piccolo...being sick like that. I love seeing him as a chibi though. ^^; Too bad more people don't review this ficcie. ^^; They really should.
Anyway, I hope to see more, and soon too. ^^; I want to see how Piccolo takes his birthday party. _^_ |
Reviewed By: Manga Wild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 07:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I've read all 4 new chapters and I have to say I like what I'm reading ^_^ Little Piccolo is the cutest thing ever!! hehe once again, you two keep up the good work cos this is a really great fanfic. |
Reviewed By: Lokia On: January 17, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope that 10 is highest cause that is what i was going for. I really, really like this. |
Reviewed By: Manga Wild [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2003 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sweet! heh I see Vegeta's *still* after the Dragonballs in this..imagine what would happen if someone made a wish to turn him into a kid LOL!!..anyways I love how you've both wrote the story....li'll innocent Piccolo..so cute!! ^_^ Keep up the good work Kaeli and Aura. ^_^. |
Reviewed By: vulk90 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2003 23:10 CST
Comment/Review:
nice....... |
