| "Winning Duo" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: Maldoror [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2003 20:34 CST
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I love the way you keep them in character in this chapter, particularly Heero thinking about security systems and emergency exits :D
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 30, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Finally a new chapter. Took you long enough to update, but the fact that you provided a link for a visual aid of their perfect house really makes up for it. Keep up the great job and update soon.
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Reviewed By: PATTY 40 On: October 30, 2003 18:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't beleve you updated this story ...I love this story ... this is so cool I love the house ..I hope you update this story again soon ..Good job..TTFN
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: September 15, 2003 21:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Jeez, LaWeez, Ham and Cheese. Its bout time you updated. Ive been suffering here for months. Please update on a regular basis. Or at least more often. I love this fic Man. *Sigh* but, if you cant, I can understand. You more than likely do have a life.
Chow Babe
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Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 03:40 CDT
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must have more! I have not got this interested in a story in a long time! this is great work...always something new happening..and a REAL relationship!ifyou need a beta reader just drop me a line I would be honored to help! |
Title: have none
Reviewed By: Patty 40 On: September 14, 2003 01:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated this story ..Because I like this one the best ... you are such a great writer... I look forward to read more of your stores .. update again soon...I have all your stories on disk so I can read them again thanks.. |
Reviewed By: Pretty Lilith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2003 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please add a new chapiter !! I am begging you ! The last chapiter was added in june... it's a very long wait... |
Reviewed By: kitsu On: July 18, 2003 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I mean, just wow! That was really great! It took me a while to read all that you had there but it was quite worth it. Your choice of words and nack for appropriately portraying the characters is outstanding! I certainly do hope that the next chapter will come up as soon as heavenly possible! |
Reviewed By: Honor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 17:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If I could do it this would be getting 11 out of 10.It's superb. It's only drawback - It isn't finished yet!:( Hurry up and write more please calic0 ///_^ |
Reviewed By: Trista On: July 04, 2003 02:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I ask is more. And HURRY IT UP DAG'NAB IT! |
Reviewed By: Aria On: June 18, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was too cute, Heero is learning to show his emotions! Please update again soon and let Duo find the perfect house for all of them. I cannot wait to see what happens next and as always this story is keeping me on the edge of my seat!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2003 10:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was up until 4:30 am and just couldn't stay awake anymore... and here I am, done - and I want more! COmplete? COMPLETE? Oh, see, that's a sign, when I want a fanfic off a fanfic simply because I still want to know what happens next... Excellent work, and marvelous characterization and motivations! Very sensitive and delicate handling of what is - in real life - a whole boatload of issues for most "real" people. |
Reviewed By: Athena--Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2003 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic. It's really well done as far as the events flow nicely together. Even if you actually haven't done this, it seems as though you've planned out the entire fic from the beginning because you tie the different happenings together so well.
I love the usage of different POVs without going into first person POV! That isn't exactly the easiest thing to do, but you're holding your own with this. Be proud!!
I'm kinda sad that a lot of the humor that was present in the beginning has been slowly draining away as the chapters go on...but! The overall fic is still great. Keep it going!
~*ATHENA*~ |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
That is just wonderful. Duo is trusting them. They're really falling for each other now. All three of them are ridiculously sweet. Write more! |
Reviewed By: EternalSpark [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2003 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You go Calicocat!! This is Sparky from WuDuoML.I totally love your story and the development from 1-31 is terrific. I thought I want details, but this story keeps my great moods. Please continue. I want lots of lemon from those three once they start exploring!! LOL |
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