| "Winning Duo" Reviews/Comments [ 102 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aria On: April 21, 2003 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you updated again and I love where you are taking this story. There are so many things you can do with the plot with where you are taking it. That Wufei and Heero thing you are doing is soooooooooooooooo cute. I love it. I hope that you write again really really really soon. This story is keeping me on edge and I want more of this great story right now. Please write lots more soon. TANKIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2003 17:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't whate untill the next chapter , this story is the best ....... Please keep going!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Demon Vampyre Goddess On: April 14, 2003 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I really liked this fic. I, myself, am currently working on a story at fanfiction.net that's building up to be a 1x2x5 thing, and it will also be my first threesome. ^_^ So reading this kinda gave me the heads up on what to except if I decide to actually make my story an all out threesome. X.x;;; Very brain-picking, all the alternating must have been hell to write, and I applaude your writing skills for being able to do so! I know my poor brain wouldn't have lasted! But anyways, I LOVED this story!!!! And Wufei and Heero's budding relationship is just perfect. Everything was balanced out perfectly and this is a reallly great ficcy! ^___^
*heart*
DVG |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 09:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
*grins*
Those two are so sweet together. Heero hasn't a clue what he's doing, and Wufei isn't all that much better, and now they're falling for each other as well as Duo...It gives me the warm fuzzies!
*snickers*
Yes, Duo...we believe you... |
Reviewed By: Aria On: April 14, 2003 04:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Do you have any idea how cute that was!!!!???? That was the sweetest thing I have ever seen!!! Update soon I want more of that and I wanna see Heero fall in love with Wufei too! I can't wait until you write more and as always you have kept me on the edge of my seat begging for more.
Love ya,
Aria |
Reviewed By: Athena--Chibi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic of yours has really influenced my writting. ^_^ Your style is really fresh and I love your different POVs. ^_^ I hope you keep going with this! You're doing a wonderful job.
The only suggestion that I could possibly make is maybe speed things up a teeny-itsy-bitsy bit. For instance, chapter 29 and chapter 30 went a little too slow for my tastes, but hey, that's ALL up to you.
Again, very nice job. ^_^
~*ATHENA*~ |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2003 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally! You didn't leave us all hanging. I'm so happy.
Duo's reactions were wonderful. First his exhausting himself telling the story, then the understated and thoughtful happiness to they're offer of staying with them. You managed to convey how tired he was while still making him at least somewhat enthusiastic.
I noticed you didn't have him mention the name of the church. But from the look of things in this story, they probably wouldn't have recognized it so it really isn't significant.
Also, good work describing the plagues. Most people make them something really nasty that was made by the alliance in an effort to clean up the streets. You took a much more realistic approach and used a simple flu.
As always good work, I eagerly await the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Wufei On: April 07, 2003 00:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Love the story, Been following it since the beginning but it the first time I actually reviews. I just love it, the interaction between the character and all that. I also love the fact that not all thing are going smootly. They all have problem (including Duo) but each of them are willing to try to correct thing.
Keep writing.
One question, will they be any discussion between Wufei and Heero? I don`t think that they had any serious discussion together without Duo since the the beach accident.
Please Update, can help wondering what will happen next! |
Reviewed By: Kyra-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 21:11 CST
Comment/Review:
You are truly evil. Cutting it off just before he finally goes through with the big explanation. But then, you always do that. So I suppose I should be expecting it by now.
Looking forward to seeing the guys reactions to what Maxwell is soon to tell them.
Also enjoying Heero and 'Fei's slowly forming attraction to each other. |
Reviewed By: Aria On: April 05, 2003 06:36 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still here with you and boy am I glad you updated. I check every chance I can for the updates for this story. You have got me on the edge of my seat at the end of every chapter!!! I
have a feeling though that things will not get easier for them cause Duo still has to tell them all about his past and everything that happened to him. I hope everything turns out okay and they all live happily ever after really soon!
Love ya,
Aria
P.S. Update again really really really soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I WAN'T MORE ...!!! THIS IS JUST A WONDERFUL STORY .... ^_~ I JUST CAN'T WAIT TO THE NEXT UPDATE ... YOU ARE A GREAT STORY WTITER AND I THINK YOU SHOULD WRITE A BOOK THATS HOW GOOD YOU ARE ... YOUR RIGHT UP THERE WITH JADE AND KC CONGRATS PLEASE KEEP GOING... PATTY 40 dpuchtler@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: Aria On: April 01, 2003 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the new chappie! Duo and Heero are soooo cute! I hope that they can admit that they do like each other as more then friends really soon cause it is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo suspenseful! I cannot wait until you put up a new chapter! Please do it soon!
Love ya always,
Aria |
Reviewed By: cherrycheesehead [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 14:56 CST
Comment/Review:
As always its absolutly beautiful. They're so sweet otward each other. Yes. Very much so.
James |
Reviewed By: Bratcat [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great. i've been watching for this. Great writing and story. Can't cait for the next update. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2003 17:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are the best !!! your storys are the greatest!!!keep writeing..... |
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