| "Endless Circle" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aya/Yohji Lover On: July 01, 2003 21:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Though the whole Yohji as a trajic soul and Aya being his salvation is done...a lot...(What can I say, I can't get enough of that scenario)This is a really good story! I enjoyed reading it I liked the poem that was spread throughout the last chapter...I would say consistency would be a good thing though(do the same thing throughout your stories-the other chapters had the poem at the beginning only) You seem to have a real talent for writing! I really felt for the two of them! It is a sign that your writing has a good voice when the reader can "picture" the characters talking and doing what is described. As far as spelling and grammar-I see your mistakes as those of any writer...the story is not harmed by them and an editor would be the one to fix them. Keep writing!!!!!![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: wingedkitten On: April 11, 2003 12:20 CDT
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would like a serious epilogue if only to see the story continue a bit more...poor omi...and what happens when ken finds out?[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 13:18 CST
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that's so cool! ^_^ i feel all warm and fuzzy inside.
Mara[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2003 19:51 CST
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That was a nice bit of light hearted fun to contrast with the more emotionally draining chapters that have preceded it.
Oh, man, Yohji is TERRIBLE to Omi. Banana? Carrot? And the egg roll and rice balls!!!
Ken's cluelessness is too funny, and his comment about people dating people they work with being exceeded in stupidity by people dating people they LIVE with was a great way to close the chapter. I can picture the SNI-NE glare that Aya could have given him for that.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Thorne [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 13:08 CST
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Oh I loved this fic, nothing better than Yohji angst.
I love the funny epilogue......but I'd love to see a serious one too ^^[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Amy the Yu On: February 16, 2003 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Utter pretty, poetic, whatever-ness.
I LOVED that. It was so good (R rated or not). ^_^
PEACE OUT =)[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Shaeric Draconis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story no I absolutely adored this fic, it is so beautifully dark and sad that the last chapter before the 'eep' made it all worth while, a smidgen of sap but realistic. Keep up the great writing and fics with these two beautiful men. I will certainly read anything you write with this pairing.
shaeric[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 09:31 CST
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"You talk?"
I loved that line. And I'm very glad to know that there will be a little more to this fic! Smut or no, I just want to see how these two react w/ each other now. Thanks for a great read.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: tmelange On: January 26, 2003 15:15 CST
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Wonderful! Hope more is ready soon![ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: nekojita_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 13:41 CST
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Oh, a glimmer of hope there at the end? Go Ran! Thanks for describing such a lovely scene, i can just imagine Yohji and Aya underneath the cherry blossom trees.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Lavender M [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 22:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm definitely anxious to see where this fic is going. Every time it looks like it's going to be predictable, it changes. I like that a whole lot, so I hope you get to the rest of it soon. ^_~*[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 07:04 CST
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I loved Aya's response to Yohji's "Dead flowers should be pruned." It was poignant and telling.
Interesting how the morning after the cemetary, Yohji is actually glad it's not raining. A significant change of heart, ne?[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: silvertoekee [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 03:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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whoa now this is a deep and some what depressing fic. its really good too.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Danka On: January 13, 2003 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a lovely fic!Such a good work!
What else can I say? It's more then good.[ Request Review Removal ] |
Reviewed By: Trinity Bennett [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2003 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Continue!!! This is getting very interesting. I can't wait to read more. *Watches her muse come out of the woodwork to chase her back to writing*
I love the way you write.[ Request Review Removal ] |
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