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| "Endless Circle" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: mishi On: January 11, 2003 05:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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please go on, its spark my interest and i read alot of fics | Reviewed By: Just a Reader On: January 11, 2003 02:37 CST
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wow, please keep writing. i feel sorry for the poor guy. it takes a talented writer to make a reader connect personally with a character. | Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likes! :)
Please go on, I want to read more of this! Poor Yohji... Promise you make him happy? *puppy eyes and Aya's katana in hand* | Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 21:52 CST
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Wow. I actually CRIED when I read this chapter. Beautifully written, poignant and bittersweet.
I loved this line: "Why?! Because you're a stupid, tragic, arrogant, beautiful moron. I love you because... because..." Yohji let out a sigh and lowered his head, "...because you're just like me."
It wasn't until I'd seen the entire anime series before I realized that Aya/Ran and Yohji had more in common than it seemed at first glance...and in many ways, they are so very alike deep down.
I also enjoyed the way Aya just "out of the blue" told Yohji his real name.
Anyway, I can't quite express in words (not very well, at any rate) how much I enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing your fic with us! | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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