| "True Love Conquers All" Reviews/Comments [ 38 ] |
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Reviewed By: gemini66 On: January 07, 2004 19:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you said this in the storie.....All that is left of his kind is you and Gohan. At one time he was the prince of your people now he is the prince of not even a handful of people who don't even see him as his their prince." as she finally quit crying and looked up at Goku. "Now all he has left is his pride and his title to a dead race. You were there on Namek when he died. You heard what he said. But what he would never tell you was that he was practically beaten everyday of his life by Frieza. And when he thought of his revenge it was took from him by death. And then you not knowing transformed into his birthright. And that was just something else to add to his list. Maybe we should all look at who he is now and not what he was. He is just the way he is because of the environment he was raised in." why not have goku talking the z gang about the above...and then have krillin say i wish we were all like you and vegeta goku (saiyajin) and go from there you know a wish all z gang now saiyajins think of were you can go from there... after the talk a new respect for vegeta and the saiyajin race i would be something new that a far as i have seen that know one else has done ...i don't know just a thought
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: December 26, 2003 03:38 CST
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this is really good and you should just keep going the way you are with this story.
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Title: IT JUST GETS BETTER AND BETTER!!
Reviewed By: 1fanoveggie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
With each chapter the story improves! Oh, and I've got an idea for you - why not make the next chapter about Trunks or Bulma's pregnancy with Trunks, hmm?
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Reviewed By: 1fanoveggie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story! It may be a bit cliched, but it's great all the same!
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Reviewed By: Raina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 03:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls. continue to write this fic. I kept checking it everytime i am onlyn. PLS!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!! me gonna die if you dont
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, so here's what I think. Vegeta comes out of the tank and he's ashamed with himself for not being able to protect Bulma. They tell him about the wish and try to keep him from hating Yamcha too much because Yamcha hates himself right now. Something along those lines would be interesting and go with the story, perhaps.
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2003 07:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Vegeta should get out of tank and that him and Goku should spar with Gohan and Piccolo.
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 17:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excelent chapters. Yes, they are too short, but if you put more than one up there at a time it's OK. Thank you for being so dilligent with the updates.
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: September 27, 2003 20:18 CDT
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I really like this one. Even though the wish has been made to stop Yamcha, in a sense, from interfering in Bulma's relationship with Vegeta, I think Goku should really lay down the line with him that he should learn to live with Bulma's decision that she has chosen to be with the saiyan prince.
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trunksbuffymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always that was a fantastic chapter! I can't wait for the next.
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Reviewed By: Raina [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it wasso awsome... they both look cute together. Hurry up and make the next chapter. I love those fucking sex scenes especialy the rape scene
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Reviewed By: jennybear91169 On: September 24, 2003 03:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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