| "Love Sucks" Reviews/Comments [ 145 ] |
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Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 03, 2003 19:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I HATE WRITER'S BLOCK!!!!!!!!
Maybe you should have the next chappy where naraku
comfronts inu and a BIIIIIIIIIIIIIIG FIGHT SCENE!!!!!!
MAKE IT SEEM LIKE INU'S GOING TO LOST THEN SOMEONE
COMES TO THE RESCUE(miroku)
hope this helps! ^_~
please continue the story!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ahsayuni [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 18:35 CST
Comment/Review:
oho writers block really sucks, i think pretty much all of us here know that.
You should plan how long it's gonna take them to fall in love, them space it out between the chapters.
Make up fun little scenarios like him taking her onto the set to be an actor for a new show 'cause he thought she was good or something like that.
At one point though, you should DEFINATLY have a fight or confrontation scene.
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Maybe Sesshoumaru would intervene because he thought it was wrong, or Naraku recruits others to stalk Kagome, even further pushing her into Inu's watch.
But for the next chapter maybe you could write something that goes from when she was in his trailer, like Miroku finding her.
(^.')>[Just some suggestions! Hope you get over your block!]
because i really want you to continue! |
Reviewed By: dfh On: February 03, 2003 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic pls if youre gonna update pls tell me my email is pauisanj@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: dfh On: February 03, 2003 05:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice fic pls if youre gonna update pls tell me my email is pauisanj@hotmail.com |
Reviewed By: TopazAngel On: February 02, 2003 23:29 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fic i've read. It's so original and i can't eait to read more |
Reviewed By: HououKageMusha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I fail to see how any one could be stupid enough to believe that Kagome loves that bastard Naraku! It is easy enough for someone with Homer Simpson's intellagance to see that she loves Inu-Yasha! |
Reviewed By: princess-of-anime-kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
You've just GOTTA continue! Its so interesting and original. Im sure you'll think something up, get some of your friends to help. anything to continue this story. |
Reviewed By: Veronica On: February 02, 2003 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why not have Inu-yasha ask Kagome out on a date but won't tell her who he is. |
Reviewed By: Maddie On: February 02, 2003 14:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
YEAH! I hate Naraku! And now he's getting just what he deserved! I like your story so far! Can you make it so Sango finds out about Inuyasha and Kagome, and gets a crush on Miroku! Oh yeah! Naraku bashing PLEASE!!! |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 17:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
do you take bribes to continue? :D |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a really good add on to the original chapter. It really explains alot. keep up the great work.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: karij On: January 31, 2003 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this one, it's very hard to stop reading! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next capter! |
Reviewed By: Lover On: January 30, 2003 18:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey I'm baaack. *Giggle* Anyway I read the conversation of Inuyasha and Kagome,and I thought it was great.Update soon. Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 19:19 CST
Comment/Review:
heheh, tat's so great! lol, yea i can spell... anyways this is totally cool and i love how it's coming out. i can't wait to see more confrontation's between naraku and inuyasha, i hope naraku gets totally put in his place! but you should have some difficulty between them, like have naraku get a shot in and then kagome has to go and bandage him up! aww.....
Mara |
Reviewed By: musechan On: January 26, 2003 18:01 CST
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I have to argee with everyone else. I hope somebody beat the living s***! out of Naraku's a**. I don't care who. I never liked him, and this gave me even more reason to despise him. Whatever punishment you decide to give him I hope its agonizing. But it was surprising when Naraku was nice, even if it was for a short moment. *gasps*. |
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