| "When Royalty Fails" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: Hurika On: December 06, 2003 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are such agood writer. You have to continue ASAP. Okay, I'll ask you one more time, please write the next chapter soon. I cant wait to find out what Trunks does with Pan and what happened to Bra in the past and how she'll treat Goten.
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Reviewed By: OrangeFlames On: August 25, 2003 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfect 10! I'm loving this story. I hope you update it soon because I'm dieing to see what happens next. I'm a sucker for romance and I can't wait to see how trunks and pan, and bra and goten's relationship devolps.
update soon! |
Reviewed By: Trunksychan On: August 25, 2003 13:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you update real soon. |
Reviewed By: JadedGirly On: August 25, 2003 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really fun! please update this story soon. |
Reviewed By: SailorScouts On: August 25, 2003 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you update this story soon its great. Really cool! |
Reviewed By: DragonPrincess On: August 25, 2003 13:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful story! I love it and hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: Vegeta-fan On: August 25, 2003 13:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! I love this story. I hope you update this soon. This story seems to be comming along good so far I can't wait to see what happens next to please update soon ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty On: July 08, 2003 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im loving it! I haven't reviewed in a while cuz my comp has been down but anyway! The different POVs it beautifully done. ANd I love how the characters react to one another. ^_^ Theres just so much!
It was awesome the way Pan adn Trunks met (my fav couple) SO far i think they're not gonna get along.
As for Goten and Bra, it seems almost like love at first sight. But Bra is in denial.
This is gonna be a love story! I hope. I can't wait for your next chapter please hurury ^_^
-Sb (jademoonstar@aol.com) |
Reviewed By: v son sayian On: May 10, 2003 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehehehe. I like this story good verese evil in the same person. I love storys on vegita-sei espically when it comes to my fav couples trunks and pan goten and bra i like your story its got some asome plot lines mixed in it. |
Reviewed By: Rina_istorlle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NO1IMPORTANT On: April 15, 2003 14:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
sugio, please update ASAP. |
Reviewed By: ninja storm On: April 05, 2003 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 13:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Can you pwease update? Pwease? |
Reviewed By: Jezika-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 14:36 CST
Comment/Review:
wow your story is really good. i'm very impressed. hopefully trunks meets pan in the next chapter!!!!! Please!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 14:56 CST
Comment/Review:
HA HA! I told you I'd get you more reviews! I got 8 of my friends to review(seriously!). Now will you update? |
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