| "When Royalty Fails" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: DBZ Hottie On: February 04, 2003 16:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Please update? |
Reviewed By: joe On: March 09, 2003 19:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
c'mon update ive been waiting a long time. Ot is a great story please continue. |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 16:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Please Update? |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 14:43 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I RATE THIS CHAPTER A PERFECT 10!And extra credit for the vocab words ^_^ As usual this story i comming along great and is deliously wonderful! Im loving this story it is great. Your a great writer so keep up the good work and update soon! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a good story. Boy, Trunks really is protective over his little sister, isn't he? He needs to lighten up a bit. I will so everything I possibly can to get you 11 more reviews, just make sure you update really fast! |
Reviewed By: nobody On: January 28, 2003 06:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story is great . man you have to finsh the story |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 01:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHH! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! Its a great stroy you've got going here ^_^ Its so moving, and I'm a big fan of t & p. This makes you think. A few spelling errors or whatever but I'm just as bad so. Well please keep up the good work, I'd really LOVE to findout how this ends. ^_^
Sb over and outtie |
Reviewed By: Chick On: January 19, 2003 01:12 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story keep up the good work!!! |
Reviewed By: nobody special On: January 18, 2003 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was intersting. it had all the right things to make it good. |
Reviewed By: EdrockZ On: January 17, 2003 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, please write more. itz REALLY good and er... Yea. Very creative, awesome work on the developement of the characters. Absolutely flawless. |
Reviewed By: petite_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! That was really good! You HAVE to write more, please? |
Reviewed By: sillydragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look, even i think that its a great job, but in the first chapter you said that you would update on a certain date and its already past that date and no update. Don't say that you will update and then not update when you say you will. Besides that, this fic is really great. Don't stop there. |
Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2003 14:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Kewl story! |
Reviewed By: bran.chan On: April 06, 2003 06:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! YOU HAVE TO AND I MEAN IT HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!PLZ
PS
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK (DUH) |
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