| "When Royalty Fails" Reviews/Comments [ 37 ] |
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty On: July 08, 2003 00:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Im loving it! I haven't reviewed in a while cuz my comp has been down but anyway! The different POVs it beautifully done. ANd I love how the characters react to one another. ^_^ Theres just so much!
It was awesome the way Pan adn Trunks met (my fav couple) SO far i think they're not gonna get along.
As for Goten and Bra, it seems almost like love at first sight. But Bra is in denial.
This is gonna be a love story! I hope. I can't wait for your next chapter please hurury ^_^
-Sb (jademoonstar@aol.com) |
Reviewed By: v son sayian On: May 10, 2003 19:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehehehe. I like this story good verese evil in the same person. I love storys on vegita-sei espically when it comes to my fav couples trunks and pan goten and bra i like your story its got some asome plot lines mixed in it. |
Reviewed By: Rina_istorlle [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 21:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please update! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: NO1IMPORTANT On: April 15, 2003 14:06 CDT
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sugio, please update ASAP. |
Reviewed By: ninja storm On: April 05, 2003 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 13:40 CST
Comment/Review:
Can you pwease update? Pwease? |
Reviewed By: Jezika-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 14:36 CST
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wow your story is really good. i'm very impressed. hopefully trunks meets pan in the next chapter!!!!! Please!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DBZ Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 14:56 CST
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HA HA! I told you I'd get you more reviews! I got 8 of my friends to review(seriously!). Now will you update? |
Reviewed By: Gotenks. On: February 04, 2003 16:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story. Update soon! |
Reviewed By: Yami Yugi On: February 04, 2003 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice! |
Reviewed By: SPONGEBOB!!!! On: February 04, 2003 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool story! If you're wondering about my name, I'm a HUGE fan of Spongebob as well as Anime. |
Reviewed By: Burah On: February 04, 2003 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Goten's one luck son of a gun! |
Reviewed By: Veggie's Little Girl On: February 04, 2003 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE THIS TORY AS FAST AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN! |
Reviewed By: Gotens Gurl On: February 04, 2003 16:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY! I hope that you get your 5 more reviews! |
Reviewed By: Trunks Li'l Gurl On: February 04, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story! |
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