| "Bejiita - Unattached" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 16:45 CST
Comment/Review:
^_^ Bet I can guess who heard Vegeta... ;) Another update please! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is intense... you NEED to update soon! |
Reviewed By: winddancer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 14:42 CST
Comment/Review:
this is gonna be a good one! keep it coming! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 22:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I have to agree with Spencers about the possibility of a Vegeta/Gohan thing... but, its your story :) at least you set up the base for some lovely angst ;) go u! |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O_O ooo I got worried whenever Goku kept getting all close to Gohan there. As much as I like lemons and naughty stuff....incest is not my thing. Haha! But I guess I shoulda known, eh? This is a Goku/Vegeta story. *shakes head to clear the cobbwebs* Nice chapter. It really does show how Goku is just as torn up over Vegeta as Vegeta is for him, if not more. I can't wait for more! ^_^ |
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