| "Bejiita - Unattached" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Title: Bejiita - Unattached
Reviewed By: SofiaSon On: October 11, 2006 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Shakes head sadly* Should be a sin to be this good...to damn talented for your own good... So damn good it's unfair. This is my first favorite story of all time. I was moved to tears. I read this when you made it about 2 years ago. But I never reviewed, how stupid of me. You'll probably never see this and know how damn good you are. I will char anyone to dust if they have something bad to say against this story. For the first real time, it is not Goku with the unbridled lust for Vegeta. I like it better when Vegeta is the one wanting, because I LOVE Goku. Vegeta's hot as hell himself. Damn. But Goku is.... no words to describe. Hella fucking gorgeous may be used to begin... but that doesn't really come close. If Goku were real and he was that hot, I would rape him, hands down. I would find a way, somehow. You seem very good at portraying the right characters feelingS. I've read your other fics and they are almost as good as this. I can honestly say you are the best. It would be cool if you wrote your own manga and used your own characters, I'm sure you would fare well doing that too. I love you (not like that!) you are the coolest author EVER! You are going to be my idol and I will try to post a story that you might like. I'll bet nobody has told you how good you are like I have, but then again, I don't care because I know what's good. Your great...great doesn'y really describe it but.... please keep it up!!!!!! 100,000,000,000,000,000,000 out of 10 (?dont ask)
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was an absolutely fabulous fic. Very nice job. You really had my feeling for the characters those last few chapters.
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Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 23:24 CST
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Very, Very nice!! Angsty, heart wreching, just wonderful in all the right ways. Loved this fic as I do all the others, Rena. Thanks. Hoshi*
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Title: Chap 16
Reviewed By: XxNeko_YoukaixX On: June 07, 2004 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i'm lovin' this fic of urs very much ^____^ & u had me on the edge of my seat a couple of times when i was readin'.*grin* i almost broke my comp when readin' it 'cause i thought u were gonna have them do somethin' i didn't want(like Bejiita/Gohan &/or Bejiita/Goku/Gohan). but u didn't & i was jumpin' around my room when Goku & Bejiita got together. oh & i was hopin'(if u don't mind ur & u don't have to listen this is just wishful thinkin') that maybe Chichi gives up the daughter to Goku (i think it would be so cute if Bejiita & Goku raised the girl not Chichi). Like she did it 'cause she couldn't look at her with out still havin' feelin' for Goku & get all depressed about it & then causin' Chichi to not be able to care for the baby well(at least until she gets over it ). or somethin' like that. i don't know i just thought it would be cute if u did that u don't have to i mean its ur fic i have no right to say what u can & can't write. i just wanted to make a suggestion to ur fic. it wouldn't change my opniion on ur fic bein' as great as it already is. ^_________^ updae soon i can't wait to read the next chap. ^____^
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this fic!!! How horrible for poor Goku to think that he has to return to the torture chambers of Chi-Chi! I sincerely hope Vegeta can find some way of saving both Goku and this poor, unfortunate unborn child!
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: February 10, 2004 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH I LUV THIS STORY!!!!!!!! YOU CANT STOP THERE! K NEEEEEEEEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! PLLLEEEAAAAASSSEEEE WRITE REALLY QUICKLY!
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh thank you for the update. Phew (wipes the sweat from her brow) thought you'f forgotten about us.
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story still keeps me wanting more. I'm glad for the new chapter. So everyone is a bit stand-off-ish to Goku. Figures.....narrow minded folks . If you are happy they try to crush it. I know Bejiita will not stand for his man to be hurt in any way. Hurry with the next chapter ^_^
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Title: Epiphany - ch 12
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What to say...? It's seemed Goku's *friends* were a little standoffish. Is this because two marriages were ended or because Goku loves another man? I knew exactlly what Roshi meant by sausage...*smirk*. Just how narrow minded are his friends? Perhaps that's why Vegeta didn't want to go with him he knew how Kakarott's *friends* would react or maybe he hoped Kakarott would have a chance to see Goten. I agree with Vegeta it's past time that they both see their sons. Great chapter and you know I'm looking forward to more...*big smile*. I noticed you have 147 reviews on FF.Net for this fic (cool) and 26 on MM, so I decided to review here...another *big smile*... Waiting.................................................................... ........................................................................... .
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Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 02:34 CDT
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Wahey, an update, and a goddamn cliffhanger! XP Vegeta knows what's going to happen... Excellent chapter, as always. Can't wait for the next ^_^ Especially if it involves Goku kissing Vegeta's neck again.. *blushes and runs away*
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 22:24 CDT
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Jeez, Rena, I'm bawling like a baby! This chapter held so much emotion...
You didn't just isolate it in one character, either. We saw it from so many standpoints. Poor Gohan. Poor Buruma. Poor Trunks. Poor Bejiita (come here, Stud, I'll comfort you!)
I hope the next chapter has some encouraging parts... maybe some Bejiita/Kakarotto lemon? :) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*beats the living hell out of herself* I AM SO SORRY I HAVENT REVIEWED!!! *beats on herself some more*
Whew... ok, where to start... Its all so damn good, its just a big jumble in mah head of what I wish to say!! so, I'll just tell you that you're BRILLIANT!! YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS AND SOON!
BEFORE I snap ^_^
Poor Buruma... she didn't deserve this, but hey, at least she still knew about it.. er, or something... seems that the blow was a little less harsh that way... but CHICHI THAT EVIL BITCH *growls*... Granted, Goku should have kept him mouth shut during sex, BUT STILL! She shouldn't have said all that in front of Goten!! How did he feel about that anyway?
So.. Now Vegeta's leaving... is he going to hunt down Goku, or is he just gonna find some place to hide out for a while?
Ok, since I've written you a novel filled with questions, I'll end this here ^_^
UPDATE SOON!
TOODLES! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 14:23 CST
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............ Ow. Poor Buruma. Normally I don't hold too much sympathy for her, but she didn't do anything this time around to deserve that, it just kinda lept up and smacked her in the face. ^_^
Oh well, if that means our boys can get together all the sooner, it's a small price to pay! =D |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: February 28, 2003 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is so good .....Please don't leave us hanging to long .....waiting *grins*for next chapter |
Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo fantastic ! It sends shivers down my spine and I can't wait to read more soon. Great work ^o^
Tank Girl |
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