| "Bejiita - Unattached" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 15:32 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY!! i love updates!
u know.... i am not very good at leaving 'good' reviews... but i think that any praise is great.. right?
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky On: February 08, 2003 04:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I already adore this fic. I like how Goku is both unstable and quite saiyajin. Welcome to the fact that your father's not human, Gohan. The part about Goku being able to scent Vegeta on his son is good, as is the idea that Vegeta might have marked Gohan with it to provoke Goku.
Goku seems to be punishing Vegeta deliberately. It was nice to see his control break a little. What an interesting little game...
MORE soon, please! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
stupid media miner... only lets the rating go up to 10 :P You have surpassed that and more...
This is seriously getting SO SO good... the scene between Goku and Gohan... undescribable... *pant*
keep up the good work u... i'll be back for the next chapter ;) |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 21:50 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY!! an update!!
WOW! Goku licked his son's face.. LOL :D |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 01:59 CST
Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE!!! PLEASE!
poor gohan... poor veggie... poor.... ME!! :D
anyway great story!! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 20:57 CST
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Yeah, it would be nice to see this continue on as yet another Vegeta/Goku fic, and I suspect that might be where it ends up, but it sure would be tempting to see a little Vegeta/Gohan deviation, now, wouldn't it? >-) I loved the interaction between Gohan and Vegeta in this last chapter. Both of them were going through such turmoil. It's the pits to want someone so badly and think that they're out of reach. You could see that in both characters.
This is such an intense fic so far - keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
O_O Hehe! Told ya I'd be here next chapter! And what a chapter! Whoo! *pulls collar to the side to let steam escape* I'm so very glad you didn't have Gohan do anything with Vegeta. It just... wouldn't be right (in my opinion). Soooo... Vegeta loves Goku, so now, he's gotta go get him! Right? ^_^ *stupid grin* I'll still be here next time! Good stuff! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 12:13 CST
Comment/Review:
:) yer awesome.. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: gemini On: January 24, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i just can't wait to see what happens next |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is going nicely ^^ can't wait to read more! -luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 06:26 CST
Comment/Review:
It was tough keeping track of the switching POVs... especially since we didn't know Gohan was the one watching. There were a few grammar flubs & spelling mistakes here and there. D'you have a beta reader?
BUT other than that this is a loverly fic! Oooh I want to see Vegeta and Goku together so bad.... am I right in guessing that Gohan will play matchmaker? I'll enjoy finding out! Wooo! |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 21:52 CST
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O_O I hope this will be a Vegeta/Goku story and not Vegeta/Gohan. I'd be a little disappointed to tell you the truth. But so far, this is really exciting! I like your writing style, it keeps me interested. I'll be here next chapter! |
Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 08:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Surprise, Vegeta! The whole of Mediaminer heard you! >D
*gives Rena Sama pocky as an incentive* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
*big glossy puppy dog eyes* T-That's it? Ohhhh PLEASE put up another chapter soon! I am SO on the edge of my seat here! Excellently written! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 16:55 CST
Comment/Review:
::whimpers and bites knuckles:: Evil, eeeeviiiilll... i want more please! |
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