| "Bejiita - Unattached" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 20:57 CST
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Yeah, it would be nice to see this continue on as yet another Vegeta/Goku fic, and I suspect that might be where it ends up, but it sure would be tempting to see a little Vegeta/Gohan deviation, now, wouldn't it? >-) I loved the interaction between Gohan and Vegeta in this last chapter. Both of them were going through such turmoil. It's the pits to want someone so badly and think that they're out of reach. You could see that in both characters.
This is such an intense fic so far - keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 23:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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O_O Hehe! Told ya I'd be here next chapter! And what a chapter! Whoo! *pulls collar to the side to let steam escape* I'm so very glad you didn't have Gohan do anything with Vegeta. It just... wouldn't be right (in my opinion). Soooo... Vegeta loves Goku, so now, he's gotta go get him! Right? ^_^ *stupid grin* I'll still be here next time! Good stuff! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 12:13 CST
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:) yer awesome.. keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: gemini On: January 24, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh i just can't wait to see what happens next |
Reviewed By: Roshy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 14:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fic is going nicely ^^ can't wait to read more! -luv Roshy- |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 06:26 CST
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It was tough keeping track of the switching POVs... especially since we didn't know Gohan was the one watching. There were a few grammar flubs & spelling mistakes here and there. D'you have a beta reader?
BUT other than that this is a loverly fic! Oooh I want to see Vegeta and Goku together so bad.... am I right in guessing that Gohan will play matchmaker? I'll enjoy finding out! Wooo! |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 21:52 CST
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O_O I hope this will be a Vegeta/Goku story and not Vegeta/Gohan. I'd be a little disappointed to tell you the truth. But so far, this is really exciting! I like your writing style, it keeps me interested. I'll be here next chapter! |
Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 08:00 CST
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Surprise, Vegeta! The whole of Mediaminer heard you! >D
*gives Rena Sama pocky as an incentive* ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 19:40 CST
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*big glossy puppy dog eyes* T-That's it? Ohhhh PLEASE put up another chapter soon! I am SO on the edge of my seat here! Excellently written! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 16:55 CST
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::whimpers and bites knuckles:: Evil, eeeeviiiilll... i want more please! |
Reviewed By: punker182biatch [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 16:45 CST
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^_^ Bet I can guess who heard Vegeta... ;) Another update please! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 16:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is intense... you NEED to update soon! |
Reviewed By: winddancer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 14:42 CST
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this is gonna be a good one! keep it coming! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 22:04 CST
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I have to agree with Spencers about the possibility of a Vegeta/Gohan thing... but, its your story :) at least you set up the base for some lovely angst ;) go u! |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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O_O ooo I got worried whenever Goku kept getting all close to Gohan there. As much as I like lemons and naughty stuff....incest is not my thing. Haha! But I guess I shoulda known, eh? This is a Goku/Vegeta story. *shakes head to clear the cobbwebs* Nice chapter. It really does show how Goku is just as torn up over Vegeta as Vegeta is for him, if not more. I can't wait for more! ^_^ |
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