| "Bejiita - Unattached" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: February 10, 2004 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOSH I LUV THIS STORY!!!!!!!! YOU CANT STOP THERE! K NEEEEEEEEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! PLLLEEEAAAAASSSEEEE WRITE REALLY QUICKLY!
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2004 06:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh thank you for the update. Phew (wipes the sweat from her brow) thought you'f forgotten about us.
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Reviewed By: majin sue [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story still keeps me wanting more. I'm glad for the new chapter. So everyone is a bit stand-off-ish to Goku. Figures.....narrow minded folks . If you are happy they try to crush it. I know Bejiita will not stand for his man to be hurt in any way. Hurry with the next chapter ^_^
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Title: Epiphany - ch 12
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What to say...? It's seemed Goku's *friends* were a little standoffish. Is this because two marriages were ended or because Goku loves another man? I knew exactlly what Roshi meant by sausage...*smirk*. Just how narrow minded are his friends? Perhaps that's why Vegeta didn't want to go with him he knew how Kakarott's *friends* would react or maybe he hoped Kakarott would have a chance to see Goten. I agree with Vegeta it's past time that they both see their sons. Great chapter and you know I'm looking forward to more...*big smile*. I noticed you have 147 reviews on FF.Net for this fic (cool) and 26 on MM, so I decided to review here...another *big smile*... Waiting.................................................................... ........................................................................... .
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Reviewed By: QueenSaiyan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2003 02:34 CDT
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Wahey, an update, and a goddamn cliffhanger! XP Vegeta knows what's going to happen... Excellent chapter, as always. Can't wait for the next ^_^ Especially if it involves Goku kissing Vegeta's neck again.. *blushes and runs away*
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 22:24 CDT
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Jeez, Rena, I'm bawling like a baby! This chapter held so much emotion...
You didn't just isolate it in one character, either. We saw it from so many standpoints. Poor Gohan. Poor Buruma. Poor Trunks. Poor Bejiita (come here, Stud, I'll comfort you!)
I hope the next chapter has some encouraging parts... maybe some Bejiita/Kakarotto lemon? :) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*beats the living hell out of herself* I AM SO SORRY I HAVENT REVIEWED!!! *beats on herself some more*
Whew... ok, where to start... Its all so damn good, its just a big jumble in mah head of what I wish to say!! so, I'll just tell you that you're BRILLIANT!! YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS AND SOON!
BEFORE I snap ^_^
Poor Buruma... she didn't deserve this, but hey, at least she still knew about it.. er, or something... seems that the blow was a little less harsh that way... but CHICHI THAT EVIL BITCH *growls*... Granted, Goku should have kept him mouth shut during sex, BUT STILL! She shouldn't have said all that in front of Goten!! How did he feel about that anyway?
So.. Now Vegeta's leaving... is he going to hunt down Goku, or is he just gonna find some place to hide out for a while?
Ok, since I've written you a novel filled with questions, I'll end this here ^_^
UPDATE SOON!
TOODLES! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2003 14:23 CST
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............ Ow. Poor Buruma. Normally I don't hold too much sympathy for her, but she didn't do anything this time around to deserve that, it just kinda lept up and smacked her in the face. ^_^
Oh well, if that means our boys can get together all the sooner, it's a small price to pay! =D |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: February 28, 2003 01:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this is so good .....Please don't leave us hanging to long .....waiting *grins*for next chapter |
Reviewed By: Tank-girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is sooooo fantastic ! It sends shivers down my spine and I can't wait to read more soon. Great work ^o^
Tank Girl |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 15:32 CST
Comment/Review:
YAY!! i love updates!
u know.... i am not very good at leaving 'good' reviews... but i think that any praise is great.. right?
keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky On: February 08, 2003 04:52 CST
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I already adore this fic. I like how Goku is both unstable and quite saiyajin. Welcome to the fact that your father's not human, Gohan. The part about Goku being able to scent Vegeta on his son is good, as is the idea that Vegeta might have marked Gohan with it to provoke Goku.
Goku seems to be punishing Vegeta deliberately. It was nice to see his control break a little. What an interesting little game...
MORE soon, please! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
stupid media miner... only lets the rating go up to 10 :P You have surpassed that and more...
This is seriously getting SO SO good... the scene between Goku and Gohan... undescribable... *pant*
keep up the good work u... i'll be back for the next chapter ;) |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 21:50 CST
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YAY!! an update!!
WOW! Goku licked his son's face.. LOL :D |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 01:59 CST
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MORE MORE MORE!!! PLEASE!
poor gohan... poor veggie... poor.... ME!! :D
anyway great story!! |
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