| "Sleeping With The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: January 21, 2003 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting idea. Great story, Raven...another masterpeice in the making! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 16:34 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! This fiction is sooo cool!!! A totally different and original idea is being used...and I really love it.
I would've reviewed sooner...I think I was the first person to read it actually, I just had to get offline and didn't have time to leave a review... ^_^;;
I would love to do fanart for this story, with Trunks becoming a Saiya-Jin Elite...though it might take me a while because I have no scanner and it'll have to be done by the computer...
Ah well. Please update A.S.A.P. so I can read more Mirai goodness!!! ^_^
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 05:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I think this isthe first time I've picture Mirai that way! Gaa! That was hot! The lemony yummy was SO well written! PLUS the part where the dragon *interupts* them was so dang funnyyyyyy!
Poor Goten- never been kissed!
I can't wait til the next episode! MAN this is a GENIUS of a plot!
I LOVE IT!!!
20 out of 10!!! |
Reviewed By: Desiivy [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 13:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Goten/Trunks fics, This one is very diffrent, but I really really like it, I am hopeing that you keep going with this fic, and not just make it a Mirai Trunks screws everyone fic.
I would personally love to see, what Trunks does & how he reacts when he finds out that he in competions with himself, for his boyfriend.
But, Hey it's your story either way I'll be waiting for more to come. |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoo Hoo first review...unless a faster typer is doing one right now.....Another excellent fic Raven!!!!!!! But i see YOUR Poosie bear got a crack at Mirai BEFORE my snuggle bunny (pretend there's a cross face here...) But excellent nevertheless...I'm all agog for the next chapters!!! Like the dedication!!!! :D |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 14:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*lots of incoherent sounds come from Bardockgurls mouth*
Th...that was WONDERFUL!!!!!!! SO worth the wait!! I knew it would be...*droooool*
Ummm... one point though... you seem to have a VERY good grasp of what my baby looks like...
"You send me over to strip or her, that's why. Plus, she had to watch Mirai and I... she said it was for research." Oh. that's alright then... *Bardock wipes brow in relief* Why did you do that!!?? "No reason dear" *nervous smile* |
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