| "Sleeping With The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 07:16 CST
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wow! I luv this fic!!!
Its greeeeaaat!!! Please update soon!! I luv it! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2003 07:12 CST
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WHOOO that was good! More more more more more! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:09 CST
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*growls, holding up her author beating stick*
now then... WHERE is thine chapter thou promised me?
don't make me take after u with the beating stick! you KNOW i will! *smirks and winks*
please hurry!! the antsyness is KILLING me love!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2003 22:54 CST
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good greif!! why havent you updated yet!? its been over a month for pete's sake!!!
what will it take for you to write more???? I'll give you ANYTHING you want
you want a beer? its yours
money?
cars?
name it!!
just PLEASE update!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*holds the lovely author beating stick behind her back and whistles innocently*
My dear, DEAR Raven... YOU FREAKING ROCK!! And you said you were no good at the rough stuff... LIAR LIAR PANTS ON FIRE!!
I must agree with Bardockgurl that this was WELL worth the wait ^_^
JUST PLEASE DON'T MAKE IT THAT LONG OF A WAIT NEXT TIME!! I have no desire to whip out TWO beating sticks... *smirk*
And thank you for the dedication ^_^ so glad I annoyed u enough into posting!!
LOVE YOU!!!
*huggle* |
Reviewed By: Black Dragons Gothic child [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2003 16:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know im late in revewing this but come on..... WHAT HAPPENS NEXT??????? come on out with it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Beka-chan On: February 01, 2003 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like! ^-^ I was getting tired of the whole T/G and or M.T/G Cliche... I personaly thing Mirai and Bardock make a sexier couple. Then again, that could just be your writing style, something I'm quickly becomeing addicted to.
-^__^- |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2003 19:41 CST
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woohooo i almost forgot to review! You did excellent on the rough stuff so don't deny it!! I'm just waiting to see Poopsie in the next chapter playing nursemaid! Yummm *Grins* |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2003 00:13 CST
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OMG OMG OMG... Ok, I'm addicted now... *bows to your greatness* PLEASE update soon! I'm gonna go crazy until you do! *trips off into her own little warped universe* |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 22:51 CST
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OMG!!! I LOOOOOOVED this chapter!! =D It was SO great!!! O_O;; You must write more AS SOON AS YOU CAN, MM'KAY?!?! Don't keep me in suspense!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: This review would be longer if it wasn't almost midnight and I wasn't sick AND tired at the same time...
X_x;; Woe is me... |
Reviewed By: little_ninjin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the part where he's putting the bandana thing over his head. So ceremonial, it's almost bdsm-ish! (yum!) And the scene at the dining area with little vegeta- whenhis world is about to explode! The angst is so wondrfully implied, where so many lesser writers over explain, you let the atmosphere and tension speak, instead. Under all that lust we've got some very sad vibes from our trunskie poo. Oh yeah...Goten....
Oh the angst!!!!! GOTEN!!!
Once again you show us the way! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh...Trunksie...you'd better run The Commander's after you!! (YUM!!)) *turns to glare at Bardock.."What's this about not needing to sleep with females???" Bardock sweatdrops.."err...nothing..um...you're the only woman for me my precious Kitty" that's better* GOD!!! This was soooo...*puuuurrr* I can't think of another word for it :D I supppose 'Bardock does Trunks on Vejiitasei' IS more interesting than 'Bardock does Trunks round Bardockgurls house'.....damn you for being right!!! Thanks for a delicious story Raven...can't wait for the rest *continues purring as she goes off to re-read, Bardock in tow* ; ) |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 15:46 CST
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Wow what a dilemma for Mirai, should he run right to a nice soft bed in the palace or run back out in the the wilds of Vejiitasei for lots of wild fun. I am in love with your Mirai. "His resemblance to his father was unmistakable; the slanted eyes and heavy eyebrows in the reflection startled him with their similarity. His face held the same shape as his father's as well, although Vegeta's deep widow's peak was missing. The most shocking feature, however, was his hair. His familiar soft lavender human hair was replaced with long spikes shooting in every direction, but falling to a deep point just past his shoulder blades. Under the direct lighting of the bathroom, the jet black mane shone with a deep purple cast. “Wow.” He breathed, as he spun around to look at the dark tail swishing behind him." WOW, yummy I wish I was CB. |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 14:03 CST
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A very cool pairing and an interesting way to go about it.
That's a very sexy Bardock you've got there. I liked the "When I catch you -- and I WILL catch you" part, plus the details of the hunt. The part about the elites fucking lesser saiyajins to death to avoid entanglements was gory but a great touch. Mirai's being awfully accomodating to the good commander... I guess age, experience, and sexual charisma do count more than youth!
Of course, I think Mirai needs to somehow drag Bardock into the future where he can have both versions of Trunks as his personal love toys, but maybe that's just because I'm perverted. Wonder if he'd like purple? |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very interesting story so far and I like it keep up the good work |
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