| "Sleeping With The Past" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2006 09:49 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this story. For a while there I was wondering what past was he sleeping with and I must say I'm shock. I too prefer Future Trunks (just love the long hair). I'm glad Goten made that choice and I feel 'a little' sorry for Trunks but he was being a dick the whole way through (serves him right ^_^) Very nice work by the way.
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Title: excellent fic!
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bardockgurl directed me to this one! I'm just now tippytoeing into the lovely living swamp of yaoi, and your Trunks/Goten romance is just right for me--! But that hardcore Saiyajin hunt stuff was awesome too! Toss in the fact that your narrative flows like honey, there's an original concept & lively plot, your dialogue rings true and your characters are all so engaging, and this was one A+ FIC! If I read any more yaoi fics this good, I'll be converted in no time :-) (hardcore B/V shipper here--don't throw stones--I am offering hand of friendship here!)debbiechan
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 11:02 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have you figured out, Raven. You're building up this little hoard of groupies with your fics. Yup - I'm not a genious for nothing... ;)
OMG - all through that last chapter, I kept waiting for Trunks to suddenly grap Goten and bond with him! O_o There were a couple of good opportunities for him to do so.
But then, this would have ended up an epic, and I would have been mad that we didn't get to read about any more Bardock/Mirai (or Bardock/anyone for that matter) action.
The way you handled the ending was just fine - now I have to sit in front of my computer hitting the blasted "Refresh" key every so often to see if the other fics have been posted yet. :(
Thanks so much Raven for doing it again! :) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 20:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
yay!! you FINALLY finished!! Im sorry about not reviewing sooner... i would have this morning if my mom wasnt so damn insistent I help her clean the basement *grumbles*
Anyway, this entire story was GENIOUS!! In fact, I think this was the VERY FIRST Yaoi I ever read O.o ... heh.. i feel like a newbee sayin that..
but anyway, you're awesome as always dear! The emotions were beautiful.. as, as usual, the sap was enough to rot ones teeth ^_^
Poor Trunks... well, I KNOW he's an asshole in this, but he has feelings too damnit!! I can't WAIT to see what happens in the next fic!! *dances*
again, absolutely wonderful! |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaaaay!! I'm going to have a hard time trying to follow up this story Raven...damn is all I can say! You really put so many emotions into this! I could really feel Trunks' pain at the end...*rubs hands together* I can only hope my follow up can be just as good as this story! |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2003 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Trunksie!!!! Okay... so I like the evil ones. Sue me. How could you make him suffer so? *clings to Trunksie* Beautiful ending! I had tears in my eyes. You're so cruel... *shakes head* |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 00:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
-twitch- Mooooooooooooore....
... What, you want coherent comments? -sigh- Okay, I loved the insights into Trunks' posessiveness & the contrast when Mirai asked Goten to top him. :D |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you're evil! Evil Trunks, Mirai Trunks, and seme Goten all in a room together! You're corrupting me Raven, not to mention giving me far too evil ideas! *runs away sobbing*
I look forward to that Bardocky fic... *drools* |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 13:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Whoa, Raven, I've barely recovered from the amazing Bardock/Trunks action, and here you go with some amazing Mirai/Goten action!
This chapter was fantastic after all, considering I hated leaving Bardock behind...
Kudos for putting Trunks in his place, but man! What a wild cliffhanger!
You better keep your promise and post by Sunday, kiddo! ;-) |
Reviewed By: Star Spangle Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yummy yummy yummy!!! I've been waiting for this lemon for a very long time!! *drowns in puddle of drool*
Yep, I finally got to read it...Now back to my hacker problem ;) |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
SM: Why am I reviewing? You already know that I love you and this whole damn fiction! Why am I reviewing!?
TheBoy: Because she'll kill you if you dont...
SM: Oh ya... heh... I loved it dear!! The lemon was soooooo beautiful and sweet and... uh oh, PASS ME MY DENTURES! MY TEETH ARE STARTING TO FALL OUT!
TheBoy: *rolls his eyes*
SM: Anywho... I can't wait to see what you have goin on next ^_^ I'm itchin to see a bitch fight!! wooo!! *grabs one of those hard hats with can holders on each side, and flops on the couch to get comfy*
Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 16:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*moans in sympathy* The only Son I kindda like, poor lil guy's gonna be so hurt! *pouts*
*eyes grow wide* LOOK AT ME!!! NOO! I REFUSE TO FEEL SYMPATHY FOR THAT-
*whimpers* Poor lil Trunksie and Goten...
GAH! *beats head* You're evil Raven... trying to convert me! It won't work!
O.o'
Heh... love the yummy Bardockyness, of course. Lovely work. I look forward to more. I'm gonna go drown myself in Vejita smut now to get these images in my head... pretty as the images are... I feel so guilty... *whimper* |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*drrrroooooolllllllll*
*tries vainly to clear delicious images of Bardock from her head in fear of Jita's wrath*
How could you do this? *sobs* I've been ripped from my Jita-koi with these sultry yummy *begins to drool again* oh-so delicious, muscular...
Jita: JAAAAAAADYYYYYYY!
EEEPppp... *runs away*
Gonna go read next chappie! *squeal*
Jita: *pouts* What about me?
Jady: What about yo-- we'll play later! I'll bring Bardock! *grin*
Jita: *smirk* Sounds like fun... |
Reviewed By: Jady [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 00:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beginning to see why you like Trunks/Goten so much... mmmmmm... yummy kissies *purr*
If it wasn't two in the morning, I'd read the next two chapters... but it's two in the morning... *sleepy yawn* so I'll read them tomorrow when I can comprehend words once again. ^_^' |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh... my... god... I can't breathe, Raven!
That was so intense. Why did you have to end the chapter, why??? Please tell me you're going to have a flashback in the next chapter!
Yeah, it's nice that Goten gets to fix Trunks up and all, but damn - that Bardock/Trunks action was just so... so... damn! I can't breathe!
I think this is my favorite of your fics so far.
Damn! Does anybody have any icewater? |
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