| "For Crying Out Loud!" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok. This is the first time I've reviewed anything here. And I must say I'm shocked that I actually enjoyed a self-insertion fic. That is a first as well. But it was excedingly funny. The things she could do to poor Vegeta. I loved the scene where she ran her fingernail down his throat, it was very reminiscent of his arrival at CC.(Epi.103 "Frieza's Counterattack") Keep it up! Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 19:12 CST
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Meant to say "Keep it up!!!" see, excitement made me all wonky for a moment! Hehe.
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg! So funny!! As I was reading it, I kept looking over at my dbz lunchbox that has Vegeta on it and picturing him in that car scared outta his wits was priceless! Keep it!!! I can't wait to see what else Layla/Bulma does to him *shares your evil grin as wheels begin to turn and mouth starts to salivatite in antispication* ;)
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Kiaya the Dragon-half On: January 22, 2003 18:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was exelent!I wish stuff like that really did happen.I would have so much fun messin' with the z fighter's heads! *evil grin* Keep the chapters comming! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 14:54 CST
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Wooops... i ment to say...*clears throat*..
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REVIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 09:43 CST
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Oooh, first meeting down! Ha ha. Bulma would totally kill you if she could! Cant' wait until next time! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 09:38 CST
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Heh heh. Where do I sign up for a mission like that? :) I'm just gonna keep reading now. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stand it!!! Don't stop now!!! Please continue this!! :D |
Reviewed By: *StaR* On: January 22, 2003 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, absolutely teriffic! :)
Please continue!
-X- |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he he he get him lol that w2as funny I like it |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh jezz you left it like that. Ok I'm hooked keep up the good work and I want more. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 15:29 CST
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(Overly dramatic music playing in the background) Dun dun dun! So, who are you going to be running around as? Things could get interesting. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 24, 2003 08:18 CST
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operation screw vegeta's brains out! Some people get to have all the fun! heh heh. Bulma's gay! That was hilarious. Hmm, what if Goku and Vegeta figure her out? Update soon. |
Reviewed By: amazon fox On: January 25, 2003 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMG! THIS IS SO.... whats the word im lookin 4? HMMMMMM..... funny? YESH THIS IS TOO GOOD! XD AHAHA I LOVE THIS! Chapter 3 was my fave, poor Veggie! I never knew self-insertion could be so funny! XD MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!! WRITE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!! |
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