| "For Crying Out Loud!" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
This really is a great story. I really don\'t know what to say.
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Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOOOOOOOVED IT!!!!!! It was het and it was self-insertion, two things that I generally don't like, but DAMN I loved this fic!!! It was sweet, and sad, and funny, and just WONDERFUL!!! The lemon made me MELT!!! And again, I don't usually like het lemons!!! Just an absolutely beautiful story!! ~wipes a tear~ |
Reviewed By: Myself On: March 22, 2003 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was very, very good. I loved the storyline, and the selfinsertion reason was excellent. The mission to get Bulma laid by the Saiyajin No Ouji...perfect. Personally, this is going on my favorites list. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAMN IT ! U UPDATED AND I DONT KNOW WHERE I WAS !!! IM SO ASHAMED OF MY SELF OHH! I LOVED YOUR FIC! The lemon was so sweet AWWWWWWW!!
I DIDNT WANT HER TO FUCKING LEAVE!!!!
OH BOY! Well Good no GREAT WORK!
CAnt wait for more fics
LATER! |
Reviewed By: lil pixie On: March 07, 2003 07:15 CST
Comment/Review:
This was excellent!!!!! U truely have a gift for writing. Hehe I think my favorite part was when u got Vegeta in the car with u and then scared the shit out of him!!!! I never laughed so hard in my life. I still get chuckles everytime I think of it. U have a God-given talent and I so look forward to reading more of ur stories. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
SaintMe, this is the best self-insertion ficcy i've read! Thanks to you, i no longer have writer's block! YAY! *huggles tight* I can't wait to more of your work! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
SaintMe, this is the best self-insertion ficcy i've read! Thanks to you, i no longer have writer's block! YAY! *huggles tight* I can't wait to more of your work! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
SaintMe, this is the best self-insertion ficcy i've read! Thanks to you, i no longer have writer's block! YAY! *huggles tight* I can't wait to more of your work! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 14:33 CST
Comment/Review:
SaintMe, this is the best self-insertion ficcy i've read! Thanks to you, i no longer have writer's block! YAY! *huggles tight* I can't wait to more of your work! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 14:32 CST
Comment/Review:
SaintMe, this is the best self-insertion ficcy i've read! Thanks to you, i no longer have writer's block! YAY! *huggles tight* I can't wait to more of your work! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 23:51 CST
Comment/Review:
O_O ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh wow ok i just read the whole thing so now i'm trying review all at once.... well ok.... first it was funny as hell i love the way ya mess with people it's great.... then it's reeaaaaaaaaaallllly sad.... sniffels.... waiiiii ok i'm going to cry now.... pleaseeeeee don't end it here.. sniff sniff... any hope for a happy ending? oh by the way love you fashion sense the clothes sounded awsome.. hmm oh just out of curiosty was this pure fiction or did you really base some of the stuff on your own life.... hmm.. well anyway from one disturbed goth girl to another awsome job i loved it. |
Reviewed By: Kalia_Son [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 21:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Deep and very well written, in fact, i'm kinda sad its over. That was a great peice of fiction, i must commend you on that. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: February 02, 2003 18:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Okay now, i just left a review for the last 3 chapters and found another one was posted in the meantime, so here's another review. ^_^ So, its over (sniff sniff.) Well, I loved it. The mission turned out to be theraputic as a side bonus, hmm or maybe that was part of the mission from the beginning. I guess only you know that though. Can't wait to see what you come up with next, or maybe panthera tigris tigris. Ha ha. I'm one to talk. When was the last time I updated? (starts whistlings innocently) Okay I'm writing a book here, so I'm gonna go now. Thanks for sharing with us! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: February 02, 2003 18:38 CST
Comment/Review:
That was beautiful. I'm going to hate to see it end though. :( |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 20:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could tell it was a flashback. Brought on by the situation, right? Your are doing great with the foreshadowing!
I am on the edge of my seat right now nearly biting my nails wondering what's going to happen next!
Waiting with baited breath,
~Ami |
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