| "For Crying Out Loud!" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker On: February 01, 2003 20:51 CST
Comment/Review:
This is good! definitely not what I was expecting. Cant wait to see how this works out. (grins evilly as visions of Yamcha getting his butt whooped) |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 15:05 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Wow things sure heated up for Vegeta and Layla aka Bulma. I can't wait for the next chapter! :D |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 00:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is getting good I want to know more lol keep it up |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: January 31, 2003 22:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chap keep it coming !! Cant wait for what u come up with next! As in for the block dont worry it happens to the best of us! so cheer up u r doing fantastic I love the carguy image for Geta MMMMMMM! *screwing him on the cuda* YUP ! I like it !
:P |
Reviewed By: mydecember [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2003 21:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was so hilarious!!!! i seriously don't like yamcha eitehr but i GUESS having him in this fic is ok. goku is so gullible!!! that just makes it even funnier!!!!!
if there was ever such a thing as a hilarious hentai story, this is it. 10 outta 10! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 31, 2003 20:39 CST
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I was going to go on and on about how evil you were for leaving us hangin like that. bad author! But then I read your a/n and okay fine, you've got a point. we do want the story to continue, but no more teasin'. :P Heh heh. Yamcha gonna go start some crap, huh? can't wait to see that! :) update soon |
Reviewed By: lillithan On: January 29, 2003 14:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story! It's even better than mine! |
Reviewed By: korik1 On: January 27, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fanfic. |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: January 27, 2003 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it Please update sooonnnnnnnn!!! and yes please put some lemony fresh in it *hentai grin*
Keep it up !!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 08:20 CST
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Okay, Bulma has gotten their attention, hasn't she? I think a little citrus would be wonderful! Of course Veggie will probably think she has completely lost her mind. It'll be great! As for the music choices, heh, I knew I had heard them. I just don't remember titles very well. I was listening to Cannon in D, thinking 'where've I heard this?' My wedding! Doh! (slaps self in the head and feels very stupid.)So anyway, I'd have to go with Moonlight and Cannon as my 2 choices. Cant wait to see what happens next time. |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: January 27, 2003 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Getting juicy, keep it up. I'm really loving it! The comedy is so original, but yes we do need some citrus in the next chap. Oh and some lemon too...errr...(blushes & ashamed of myself). Anyway, update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Pauliesmom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 20:23 CST
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Another unbelievable event: I'm reviewing again...
Just because a story has a lot of comedy in it does not mean it should be without angst. I think that the drama you are adding is only going to make the tale richer and more enjoyable. I look foward to more. Nice way to get rid of Yamcha! LOL! He's cute but soo dumb. Bulma is so un-gay it's funny. She even thought that Goku was a hottie(I agree!)the first time she saw him as an adult and let's not forget Zarbon. As for my music choices I have always loved "Fur Elise" by Ludwig Van Beethoven although Mozart is very good as well. Oh and thank you for the message. ^_^ Also thank you for updating regularly. Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: January 26, 2003 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep it up, great work. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 16:31 CST
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good chapter as usual. As far as the music goes, I'll have to get back to you on that as soon as I consult my Kazaa acct. :P I know I've heard the mozart one, probably the others, but I dont know names to remember which was which. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great chapter keep them going I would have pick Fur Elsie and Moonlight those are so good |
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