| "For Crying Out Loud!" Reviews/Comments [ 56 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 14:54 CST
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Wooops... i ment to say...*clears throat*..
UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPDDDDDDDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shastania [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 14:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
REVIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 09:43 CST
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Oooh, first meeting down! Ha ha. Bulma would totally kill you if she could! Cant' wait until next time! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 09:38 CST
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Heh heh. Where do I sign up for a mission like that? :) I'm just gonna keep reading now. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't stand it!!! Don't stop now!!! Please continue this!! :D |
Reviewed By: *StaR* On: January 22, 2003 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, absolutely teriffic! :)
Please continue!
-X- |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he he he get him lol that w2as funny I like it |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh jezz you left it like that. Ok I'm hooked keep up the good work and I want more. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 15:29 CST
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(Overly dramatic music playing in the background) Dun dun dun! So, who are you going to be running around as? Things could get interesting. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker On: January 24, 2003 08:18 CST
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operation screw vegeta's brains out! Some people get to have all the fun! heh heh. Bulma's gay! That was hilarious. Hmm, what if Goku and Vegeta figure her out? Update soon. |
Reviewed By: amazon fox On: January 25, 2003 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMGOMGOMG! THIS IS SO.... whats the word im lookin 4? HMMMMMM..... funny? YESH THIS IS TOO GOOD! XD AHAHA I LOVE THIS! Chapter 3 was my fave, poor Veggie! I never knew self-insertion could be so funny! XD MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!! WRITE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!! |
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