| "Patience" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Toudou Higiri On: May 01, 2003 09:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alrightly ^_^
Love the fic, it gets better with every chapter!
Keep up the good work~ |
Reviewed By: Lucifer morningstar On: March 20, 2003 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gracias por este capitulo! I have been waiting for you too add more to it for a long time!
Poor Yotan! He is really pathetic in this chapter, and it is kind of hard ot read it, but it totally adds to the drama of the story.
Ken is really well done. His reactions are realistic and heartbreaking. Very well done.
Nagi and Omi are kind of strange..very mysterious.
Ran..Ran..Evil, but understandable. I don't like his methods, but they are understandable, since I have seen people act this way when they want something.
I also hope that dear old Schu does put a wrench in this..it would make it interesting!
Muchas Gracias otra vez. Tu historia es buena y si la voy a countinuar a leer. |
Reviewed By: Toudou Higiri On: March 19, 2003 07:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really want to read this one and Don't cry. I would email you but I'm a school and email isn't allowed. My email is
Adorable_Nagi_Naoe@hotmail.com
email me! |
Reviewed By: Hermes On: March 03, 2003 13:43 CST
Comment/Review:
It`s nice. go on , you`r on the right way. |
Reviewed By: lara On: March 01, 2003 12:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Yup, the fic is nice but the updates too slow. |
Reviewed By: Minoo On: February 17, 2003 05:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice fic. reading it is fun. |
Reviewed By: Lucifer Morning On: February 11, 2003 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way it is going. Although Ran is being a bit evil..well, he loves Ken and that is understandable. Nasty, but I can see his reasoning. I don't think he's being eevil.. If Ken does fall for him I might be tempted to think he's an eevil man.
Pregunte si hablabas espanol porque esa es my primera lengua tmabien. Pero yo e vivido en Canada por 15 anos.
Anyways, I think your story rocks and yes, you should totally continue it.
Bye bye |
Reviewed By: Lucifermorning On: January 29, 2003 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was quite anxious to see how you would continue this fic and i have to say that it was well worth the wait.
I hope you continue this since it is a gutsy thing to write. I like it because it is terribly realistic and you aren't concerned with sugar-coating what is going to happen at all. I like the approach that you are taking with it. Great job.
The only thing buggin me..is Spanish your first langugae or what? I can kind of tell but not quite...there are some grammar errors that hint at it.
No matter. Great story and keep at it. |
Reviewed By: Lucifer Morningstar On: January 25, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude. I think you should totally continue it. It's a rare thing to get such gritty and raw stories about the boys. go for it man. |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 11:05 CST
Comment/Review:
eeeeeek!! Yohji-sama!!! You have to continue! You can't just leave poor Yotan like that! *whimpers*
and yes, angst=good |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 10:38 CST
Comment/Review:
*eyes her* better continue...angst=good. ANd besides, I wanna know what's going ON!!!
BUT...angst good with a happy ending....*glare*
All right...pile on the angst!!!!!!!! |
