| "A Child" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: mylexy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2003 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Such a wonderful story! I just started reading this and I love it already. And I'm more sympathic than ever to Inuyasha! |
Reviewed By: Pain N A$$ On: February 24, 2003 21:56 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE UPDATE! It feels like forever. I know you have a life...but I don't! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: dragonlady sakura On: February 22, 2003 21:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Almost moved me to tears. Wonderful begining. Hope the second chapter is coming out soon. |
Reviewed By: myst runner (not bothering to log in) On: February 18, 2003 18:48 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was very good. continue please continue. i want to read more. i think many other people would like to read more also. please. please with whipped cream and cherries on top. i'll even give you a cookie. or better yet a cyber joint. please continue.
myst runner |
Reviewed By: *Lin-shingummy* On: February 16, 2003 12:07 CST
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Very sad. Harsh treatment already for Inuyasha. I guess we'll soon see if anyone cared for him other than his poor mother. |
Reviewed By: maria On: February 08, 2003 09:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That . was . deep . It's very intricate , and moving making it very intersting . I have a few things for you to keep in mind . Myoga-jiji seems to be a gaurdian to Inuyasha , is he going to appear in the story ? If so what relationship does he have with Inuyasha's mother and father ? Lastly in one of the episodes Inuyasha comments that he doesnt remember his fathers face . This could play a role in your story as well . Well keep writing beautiful stories ! |
Reviewed By: giggles On: February 08, 2003 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOur story was very well written and truly caught my interest . Some of my friends also have been writing about Inuyasha'a past , but the way you lay out the story it adds interest . I hope you write more because I am intrigued as to how the rest of the house treat Inuyasha . In your story you touch base on lots of things that most likely did happen to Inuyasha. Maybe you'll explain this in later chapters but does Sesshomauru live in the same house as Inuyasha or a different one?
^_^ I hope you keep writing !
~giggles |
Reviewed By: nancy catolina On: February 07, 2003 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE THIS SOON! Please... |
Reviewed By: shimigumi On: February 06, 2003 22:10 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE! PLEASE?! BEST FIC EVER! |
Reviewed By: ***** On: February 05, 2003 18:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now after all the compliments...update soon! Wonderful story. |
Reviewed By: ***** On: February 05, 2003 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice development in plot. Has a lot of room to work any numbers of storylines. Are you going to go from childhood to when he meets up with Kagome and gang? |
Reviewed By: Krystal On: February 05, 2003 17:44 CST
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Reading this makes me want to hug my baby more than ever before. |
Reviewed By: Phillip On: February 04, 2003 00:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Why is everyone so against baby Inuyasha? His mother married (?) his father, the demon Lord, right? And her father would have expected kids, so what's is up with the bias? |
Reviewed By: keg o' beer On: January 31, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is the next chapter going to be the start of Inu's crappy childhood. It sounded foreboding when his grandfather said "We'll see." |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: January 31, 2003 16:50 CST
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Nothing is as powerful as a mothers love for her baby. All GOOD mothers know this. Precious scene with Inuyasha mother. |
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