| "A Child" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: gx-Silver On: January 15, 2005 20:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I finally found this story again. I had forgotten the name and I didn't remember where I had read it before. Anyway...Not only is this beautifully written and touching, but it's a nice look into your version of Inuyasha's life. I hope to read more chapters soon.
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Reviewed By: HalfBreed101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*starts sobbing* poor InuYasha! I wanna give him a hug! *clams down* good fic, though...keep writing
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Reviewed By: HalfBreed101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2004 15:56 CST
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OMG!!!*starts sobbing* Inu-Chan! no! poor Inu-Chan! i-it's a good f-fic, though...p-please keep wr-writing...
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Reviewed By: Wind Sorceress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 23:00 CDT
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NOOOOOOOO! I just read your story. Then i saw that you havn't updated in 11 months! that means your not going to finish it?! What's wrong with you!!! you can't leave something that good unfinished. :( ............good story though ;)
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Reviewed By: jaggy On: June 03, 2004 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is just so sad! I almost cried for the poor guy. This is a must-read fanfiction.
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Reviewed By: YoukoKurama201(not logged in) On: April 14, 2004 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my GOD! This is soooo sad! Please, please, please, PLEASE update! Onegai, i'm begging you! this is a wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: K005 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2003 06:39 CST
Comment/Review:
loved it pls update
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Title: great story!
Reviewed By: rayjayiscrazy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 05:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story. It's very well done. Please update!!!!!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sugoi.... I love how detailed and indepth your writing is. And I'm loving this story, and I found that eating chocolate pocky while writing fiction like this helps alot. Update soon!!
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: October 20, 2003 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aaaahhhh that was so sad. My poor little inu-baby. I really do hope those bastards get what they deserve for treating him like shit. The kid too. I loved it, obviously. Keep up the good work. Chow Babe
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Reviewed By: Megami Riley On: September 22, 2003 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAI!! I love your fic! I want you to update it ASAP okay? I wanna know what happens to poor Inu-chan. *kicks the the bullies* grr..update update update update!
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Reviewed By: arihat On: September 06, 2003 11:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad. I really love this story and feel so sorry for poor Inuyasha. Great way to portray his childhood. |
Reviewed By: Saki On: August 19, 2003 13:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe I hadn't updated! Bad me. This is till the best Inu story here at MM. I feel so bad for innocent Inuyasha. Great way of writing about the cruelities he's facing. Makes me more addicted. |
Reviewed By: kk On: July 21, 2003 12:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just luv the stories of Inuyasha's past almost as much as the ones wit Inuyasha in full demon form but I luv what you are doing not many people are creative enough to step into this kinda story please get another chapter up soon |
Reviewed By: Henna On: July 17, 2003 12:56 CDT
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The triangle you believe to be his nose is actually just the shadow of his nose, usually muted down to no more than a triangle. He has a human nose in both the manga and the anime. But all in all, great story. You're a very good writer. |
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