| "A Child" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lupin 3rd On: January 30, 2003 23:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kind of painful to read. In a good way! I really took to the mother. She loves her baby no matter his birth and just can't understand the hatred. Please put out the next chapter as soon as possible!!!!! |
Reviewed By: JustDustin On: January 30, 2003 20:17 CST
Comment/Review:
Unbelievable stuff. And so engaging for a first chapter. Gonna go out and buy every piece of Inuyasha manga there is! My interest is peaked. |
Reviewed By: Cassie On: January 29, 2003 20:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want an Inuyasha of my very own! Of course, if he'd had a better earlier life he wouldn't be as cool is he is now. |
Reviewed By: Pain N A$$ On: January 29, 2003 19:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Kind of moved me to almost tears. I like Inuyasha even more now. (holds Inuyasha plushie and squeezes tight) |
Reviewed By: ALL CAPS On: January 28, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE, MORE, MORE! I SO NEED MORE OF THIS TOUCHING STORY. |
Reviewed By: hitomi On: January 28, 2003 18:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Whoa, deep. Makes you think too. Inuyasha's childhood trauma's the reason he acts so hard and untouchable. Or pretends to. |
Reviewed By: Seth On: January 28, 2003 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this absolutely breaks my heart and I know it's just a story. How sad to be hated just for being different. Something you didn't even have control of. Very sad. |
Reviewed By: Shampoo On: January 25, 2003 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wish I could give you higher than all 10's. Excellant written chapter and the sense of foreboding Inuyasha's mother feels gives off a nice tension. Guess things will be getting worse for him and his mother? Aw! |
Reviewed By: nancy catolina On: January 25, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, this is has me feeling so bad for Inuyasha since he was never given a chance because he was mixed. You really feel for him and his mother because she loves him for who he is. WAHHHHHH! Please write the next chapter soon! |
Reviewed By: Saki On: January 24, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very well written but also so sad. It makes you feel sorry for anyone hated for the circumstances of their birth. Very touching. |
Reviewed By: Yen On: January 27, 2003 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, I've always assumed Inuyasha had a pretty sad childhood with only his mother to count on. Even sort of mentions it in the series. Poor baby...I can't wait to see how you write about it. |
Reviewed By: Kuno-baby On: January 25, 2003 11:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually got teary eyed when I read how much his mother loved him and knew how everyone would treat him for being different. Kind of depressing, but a good read. |
Reviewed By: Kellis On: February 11, 2003 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is tight. I was so impressed by the subject matter and the writing. Since the manga/anime doesn't go into much detail about his early life or childhood, I hope you explorer it in this story in great detail. |
Reviewed By: animealam [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have always been of a mind that Inuyasha suffered terribly while he was a child. The way he is almost screams it at you. But it also shows how determined he's to keep going.
I am glad that you have decided to deal with this topic, and so far the way you started the story points to more interesting chapters. I am not sure if you'd take it all the way to the present but it might be interesting to see this story as memories.
I hope you have a chapter out soon. |
Reviewed By: Perry On: January 25, 2003 11:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, no wonder Inuyasha turned out the way he did. What a crappy life the poor thing had! Least his mother loved him unconditionally. |
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