| "Fairy Tale Ending" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Chibi-chan On: April 10, 2003 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, holy shit. I LOVED IT. ^_~ Call me a sado at heart, but I loved the whole story. Talk about nightmare...but the pain *sighs* It was soooo...nice. Very refreshing. |
Reviewed By: Nina On: February 08, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
O___O
That was ... really... tragic.
A good fic though, even if a bit rushed in the second part... |
Reviewed By: chibikaos On: February 09, 2003 10:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Sniff sniff.... i liked the story but but why did you have to kill Aya |
Reviewed By: bobauna On: February 14, 2003 12:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so very ironic. "Fairy Tale Ending" *muahahaha* i love it! i wish i could write like that. |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: February 08, 2003 05:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah,....happily ever after. *cackle* That was great! Very lovely twist to the fairy tale genre. Poor, naive Ran...oh well, I enjoyed reading about his pain. ^_^ *pats* |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 04:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is very different from every other thing I've read, and I really like it! :) It's a nice take on the whole fairy-tale-thing with 'live happily ever after'-stuff *shudders* and it's definitely got an interesting plot! :)
Just don't make Schuldig too evil... But on the other hand, if you do, maybe he'll become sad and come and live with me instead... *all good intentions come with an ulterior motive* ^^
Anyway, hurry up with this, I want to read more! :) |
Reviewed By: pink bunny On: February 04, 2003 23:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I sense the angst coming! The sappyness mixed with the foreshadowing of coming doom and despair was great. I hope you write more soon. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: dragyn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow this is so good! You have to write more soon please? Don't let it trail off like almost all the other fanfics I've been reading because it makes me sad when authors do that ;_; I really like the plot so far (I want to find out why poor Aya is sitting all alone in that cold nasty tower and what Schu has to do with it).
The description you use is great and your writing style is beautiful~! ^_^ The only thing I might suggest is using the Schuldig (the proper German spelling) instead of Schuldich. |
Reviewed By: kato-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 12:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Ack! Add more!! What happened to make Ran so sad while telling this story? Schuldig was jealous? He did something to break them up? I love this story! |
Reviewed By: Akari-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 03:49 CST
Comment/Review:
GAHHHHHHHHHH! *stabs your homework*
;-;
More! Please? |
Reviewed By: Akari-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 00:13 CST
Comment/Review:
EEeeeeee I love this!
More soon please!? |
