| "Archery" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Japanimania On: September 19, 2004 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you made her family perverted good job
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 19:38 CDT
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laughs about funny ending ^.~ u r good
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2004 00:32 CDT
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haha I bet that's the first time a guy was happy to lose a bet! Great lemon!! The ending was really funny too!! Good job! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MirokuMinded On: July 06, 2004 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD i liked that a lot but...*eye twitches ...and twitches again...* her MOM and GRANDPA?!?!?! WATCHING?!?!?! *shudders* o thats creepy. but very funny indeed! XD
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Reviewed By: LonelyBunny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2004 20:19 CST
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lolz i loved the ending :)
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Reviewed By: Biganimefan1 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2004 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahahahhaahhahaah
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Reviewed By: Kagura_Yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2004 00:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Mildly voyeuristic end, but without being kinky or nasty. Well done!
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2004 13:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
halerious ending
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was cool! dose kagome ever have a perverted family!!! lol sounds like something that my parents would do! anyways keep writing, from your friend, maria....ja ne
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Title: ^_~
Reviewed By: MidNight-Kitsune On: December 30, 2003 17:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep it up^__^
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Reviewed By: Angel452 On: October 03, 2003 00:11 CDT
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So, was there a written legend at the shrine that Kagome never knew about? Wow! I wonder if it is in her history book. Haha!
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Reviewed By: Calinda On: July 10, 2003 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a very wonderful story. Keep writing i enjoyed it immensely, especially the ending |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow! This was fantastic! I loved it! There was a plot there and you should continue it. You could explore everyone's reaction to the 'new' relationship between Kagome and Inuyasha. Not to mention.. *clears her throat* the obvious lack of protection. ~_^ See, there's a sequel if I ever saw one! ^_^
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: xi_hou [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2003 22:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Outstanding. I loved the whole "negative silence" bit. ;-) |
Reviewed By: Sapphire Sphinx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. I really loved how you made the cat a hentai. |
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