| "Archery" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: Grinning like a fool
Reviewed By: InuKags_little_mutt [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cute! That was just beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2006 20:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
::face faults:: god what an ending... perverts... oh lordy. at times this fic made me smile contently and laugh my ass off simultaneously. i loved it. i liked how it was awkward yet flowing at the same time. very cute.
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Reviewed By: HOWL_TO_THE_DARKMOON [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2006 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!! THAT IS SO MEAN THAT YOU MADE KAGOME'S MON AND HER JII-CHAN AND SOTA!!! TOO LISTEN IN AND WATCH THEM HAVIN' SEX!!! YOU ARE SO EVIL BUT A VERY GOOD WRITER
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Reviewed By: pup [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2006 17:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was awesome! Hot lemony...so good! .. n Kag's mom n grandpa were watching.. what d heaven. lmao.
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Title: mimori
Reviewed By: Mimori [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! the ending was sooooo funny!!!
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Title: kool!
Reviewed By: sugerT On: August 10, 2005 20:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it!!! it was kinda sick though about her mom and jiichan watching through the crack in the door though, but still good. and the part with souta is funny
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Reviewed By: Silo101 On: May 04, 2005 14:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i almost laughed my head off at the ending, lol soutas only like what....8 how the hell does he know what just happened? the ending was funny though
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Title: NICE
Reviewed By: sesshylover10 On: April 22, 2005 22:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this it was very good very creative people that read this will defintley luv it. signed: sesshylover10
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 02:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
ohy me... it was so sweet. and none of that angsty crud that I seem to have some perverse need to write when I do lemons... oh thank the heavens. Wait, no, actually, thank you. :0) ~Dark Avenger
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Title: Nice Job
Reviewed By: Mega Dawg [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first perfect score I gave. I read this one a while ago but never reviewed it. Please write a sequel!
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Title: Archery
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 16:52 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: light kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2005 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahaha the beginning was a bit funny... but i can't believe kags family is absolutely ok with that!... i mean even sota was listening! and i thought m,oms are supposed to be just a bit over protective somehow. oh well its good
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Reviewed By: Darkness Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i agree with the first reviewer this story just screams SEQUEL! and perverted family.... id be sooo embaressed if my family did that, lol funny but perverted ending! yay! ^_^ good job! ^_- have a cookie -gives cookie-
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Reviewed By: AndreahTreole [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a funny ending, it was hilarious. Good job !
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Reviewed By: MirokuBabi On: September 28, 2004 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! YOU ARE A GREAT LEMON WRITER! I BOW TO YOU! *bows*
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