| "Stray Kitten" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel~Rinoa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 18:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aawww... so cute!! =^.^= Please hurry with the last chapter soon! This is a really cool story! More Ran and Youji!
- Angel ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: February 16, 2003 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaahooooo^^ another chap YAY^^...you see I'm (was^^) here to read your new chap of Stray Kitten ^_____^...what a SHAME if I didn't^^!!!
*Phew*....what can I say^^......EXCELLENT, GREAT, KAWAII^^...like always, ne ^_~.....only LOOOOVELYYYY^^!!!!!!
Oooh this scene was cute *giggle*....when Ran made "Meow"^^ (our little, cute kitten^^) and than Yohji said "Come here"^^...and Ran took his hand...ooowwww kawaii kawaii kaaaawaaaaiiiiiii ^____^ (these scenes make my heart jumping high^^)!!! I have to say it again^^....ur stories are always sooo full of emotions and and^^....ooohhh I'm going out of words^^.....adorable....yes this is the right word ADORABLE^^!!!!!!!
Yes yes yes....a third chappie....pleeeeeeaaaaaaseeeeeee^^...that would be DAMN GREAT^^...and maybe with a cute little lemon scene ^_~....you know full of emotions and so ^_~...*shakeswiththehead*...*Koji-chan you are sooo sentimentally*......*I know^^....and it doesn't matter to me ^____^*!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sooooo long^^ (12 pages^^) *phew*....I LOVE long chaps^^ and I hope it still gets longer ^_~...a little bit ??? You know what I'm talking about right^^ (Colours...for the others who maybe don't know it ^___^)!!!!! WOW before next month O_O....oh that would be GREAT GREAT GREAT^^...thanx *bows to the ground* I'm looking forward to it ^.^ *isdancinginherroom* ^_________^!!!!!!!!!
Go on with ur great work^^....you make me REALLY REALLY HAPPY ^_______^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ja *sill dancing in her room*^^
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: Vampire Louis [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 03:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So.. *sobs* beatiful! Omg! Was that a TBC I saw in chapter two? It was! Oh please oh please fortheloveofallthatisgoodandholy write more! *smiles* Yeah... that'd make me happy. It's really a sweet fic and I'm reeeeealy enjoying it. It made the days after 'Single's Awareness Day' a LOT better. You win a lot mon amie! |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 03:03 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwww, that was soooooo cute! Please write more, soon! |
Reviewed By: trisha On: February 15, 2003 22:32 CST
Comment/Review:
ahh, thanks sardius...i've been looking forward to chapter two...this story is so sweet and lovely...i like your sad, sweet, lost ran...and your lonely melancholy yohji...i'm glad they found each other again and i hope they can have a happy ending. |
Reviewed By: babaca [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice Sardius! It moved along very smoothly. So sweet and romantic. Give Yoji and Aya a happily ever after, please? ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Lilla On: February 02, 2003 12:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Heh thanks a lot dear girl, I don't deserve all this...
As for the beta eh... My bad betaed it while still drooling over the lemon scene, so it is all my fault, if a couple mistakes escaped. Still will try to do better next time. Of course I might not be able to if I am drooling too badly. ^.^;;; |
Reviewed By: Koji-chan On: February 02, 2003 09:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If it was okay ?_?...are you KIDDING!!!!!! It was BREATHTAKING...excellent ^______^!!!!!!! The way you're writing and the Lemon scene^^....GREAT, no matter how many lemons^^ you've read, each one is BREATHTAKING....EXCELLENT^^! All the stuff you're writing is really really GREAT...YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE....SOOOOON!!!!!! *that's an order!!!!* ^____~
I wonder when you're updating "Colours of My Life"...hopefully soon^_^...OOONEEEEGAAAIIII^^!!!!!!!
Ja *MORE MORE MORE...*
Koji-chan |
Reviewed By: neko-chan On: February 02, 2003 00:49 CST
Comment/Review:
oooh, write more of this please! so good! some of the grammar could use work, but it's not really bad and doesn't take away from the story at all. update soon! |
Reviewed By: kamibukurosama [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 21:28 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
^____^ (mou, ff.net is misbehaving)
This fic is so sweet and though Aya is OOC, I think I like him better like this. I really hope to see more soon, I'm a big fan now!
ja ne
kami-chan |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 18:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, really nice! I like the pairing XD!( |
Reviewed By: boowoman [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 18:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Hmmm, really nice! I like the pairing XD!( |
Reviewed By: Isa-chan On: February 01, 2003 10:50 CST
Comment/Review:
WAI!!! This is so good!! I want more Please please please!!! *glomps* You always do such cool fics! *bounces* YAY!!!! |
Reviewed By: kamibukurosama [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 10:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaaa!!! *glomps you* That was wonderful, i loved this fic so much because so wrote it so well. you have this nice of way of describing emotions and the lemon ending was great too. cant wait for ur next fic! take care!
kami-chan |
Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue On: February 17, 2003 16:28 CST
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^_^ I liked!!! |
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