| "Broken Butterfly" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 12:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, that's interesting. Are you going to continue? Please do, because I want to know what will happen next. ::kicks Schuldig:: HOW could you be so HEARTLESS?! I've read one very very nice Schuldig somewhere and I do believe I'm not going to kill him in this one. ^_^' Interesting start, but not bad.
Please continue the fic. |
Reviewed By: Lauren (puff_broccolli@hotmail.com) On: March 26, 2003 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to write a sequel? I think your idea is really creative and interesting. Who else would have put the soccer player in a wheelchair? Maybe you could mention how he got in a wheelchair... I'm only giving you a nine because you left me hanging!
Anyway, I like your style. It's really expressive, but also very simple and easy to comprehend. Nicely done. |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope that there will be another chapter to this? Or at least a sequel? You can't leave us hanging like this, you know... :) |
