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Reviewed By: inny On: February 11, 2003 16:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hayyyyyyyy!!! I like this story sooooooooooooooooo much!!!! byt what the f#ck is a broom?? I'm dutch so i don't know!! could you please tell me when you update and tell me what a broom is??(cyber_inny@hotmail.com)
good luck with writing the next chappy ^_^ and don't pay attention to those who do not like the chap!! If they don't like it , they should not read it!!!!
kisses.. ~*INNY*~ |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 18:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh... my... god... Chapter 3 had me wriggling on my seat and... uh, I'll spare you the details. I think I'm gonna make my mate happy tonight....
Greatly looking forward to Vegeta's POV! |
Reviewed By: java On: February 11, 2003 21:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say that this is and excellent story. The only thing I don't like is how Vegeta is portrayed. I hope that there will be a happy ending between b/v. |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 22:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About time I got mediaminer's review thingy working!! ^^
GREAT CHAPTER!!
a broom eh?? isn't that a bit bulky?? ;P
CONTINUE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: Yari On: February 12, 2003 11:10 CST
Comment/Review:
A BROOM?!?! are you kidding me?!?! Man that felt like one of those prison movies! Anyway, I just hope that Bulma gets revenge on Vegeta's ass!! I mean, A BROOM?! and she enjoyed it!? WTF is wrong with her!?
Anyway, good job and update soon! I can't wait to know what happens next! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 01:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I could have sworn I reviewed this before... meh
THIS IS EXCELLENT!
I must admit though, when I read the first chapter where he broke her legs, my stomach kind lurched... *shudder* but you wrote it VERY well.. I can't imagine how taking away Vegeta's virginity caused such a violent nature in him O.o... wowsers...
But yes... this is an excellent story! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!! Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WEEEEEEEEEEEE!! great lemon
why don't you reply to my email?
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRs
CONTINUE SOON ^^ |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress On: February 07, 2003 06:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know where the came to you but this is good, and you represent the type of abusing man perfectly. I know this isn't right to right about it, but sometimes, girls (just like bulma in your fic) don't understand that even if they love their man, things aren't supposed to be that way. Good work, and continue! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 06:19 CST
Comment/Review:
:cries at chapter 2:
So... well... written...
I REEEEEEEEEEEEEEALLLLY want to know what that last cryptic comment meant - she never would have left him alone? ARG! I'm DYING to know what's going through his head now!
"I hate you." "I don't care." -- Brilliant. |
Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 05:20 CST
Comment/Review:
hey intersting fic! Its a good change to see a real sadistic side of Vegeta, I mean its a good change from all the others that are practically the same! Not that I mind that though, I luv V/B fics!! Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: February 07, 2003 05:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!!
just wonderful, I like to read when Vegeta is like this, treating Bulma like this, and when Bulma reacts this way too it.
Looking forward till the next chapter, I love it when Vegeta is this hard, it actualy turns me on =/
Go on with the fic!
don't listen to the peeps above me, come on, he's a warrior! and atleast this is something new, something originial!!!!!
and pain with pleasure is a very good mixure.
good story, keep going! |
Reviewed By: eyes_on_the_birdie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2003 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it, but i want to kill vegeta and slap bulma right now |
Reviewed By: sommore On: February 05, 2003 05:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I SO LOVE THIS STORY!! PLEASE DON'T CHANGE IT. IF PEOPLE DON'T LIKE IT, THEY DON'T HAVE TO READ IT. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 05:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Cooooooooooooooooool. I can't stand ultra-sappy B/V; this is a welcome change. Have to confess I don't really like Bulma and have wished many times for Vegeta to slap her silly... but this is good too. Mua ha ha! |
Reviewed By: cha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say that while this fic is well written and an excellent plot, I winced when Vegeta broke both of her legs - ouch!! Definitely made me fell very uneasy, but some women will endure almost anything for pleasure and as this is a sadomasochistic type of relationship, it fits in and Vegeta is extremely strong after all. Keep up the good work...I'd like to see more. |
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