| "Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Title: To Tina
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 00:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh I bet you are totally retired, what a bummer!! This was going so well, (well, back in 2003 light years ago when you wrote it). I think your incursion into fanfiction was very brief, you dissapeared quite quickly! This was just my kind of thing though, dark and unabashed. Just like I like Vegeta. If you are still around, will you let me know? Caprice
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Reviewed By: spini On: March 12, 2004 08:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey do you still write on this fic? I hope so! Come on and do some more chapters please!!!
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Reviewed By: Miyu On: June 30, 2003 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nooo, you can't enplane Vagetas “side” of the story, be creative, I know IRL woman NEVER know what is going on in side her mans head. Until she can break him, and get him to open up to her, wile she ALSO opens up to HIM, NOOOO!!! I Find this really really erotic not knowing what is driving Vageta..
ohh and I LOVE NIN too,
"you make it all go away,
you make it all go away,
I jsut want something... *deep breath*
I just want something I can never have.."
when you listen to all his songs, I think this woman he loved left him and he realized that he was a bad man. "and I'm starting to scare my self" and they say the best way to break a "bad man" is to love him. the perfect drug
"take me...
with you...
take me...
with you...
I enjoy the fact that I can never completely understand some one. |
Reviewed By: clovers On: April 29, 2003 03:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I'm going to be thinking about this fic forever... You must finish!!! I'll give you a cupcake... With sprinkles? Great job! Ohh tingly feeling when I start reading these... lol |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2003 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's beeeen soooooo long, Please update!!!!! Please |
Reviewed By: Frejia On: March 17, 2003 20:04 CST
Comment/Review:
its good why didnt you write more?
well if you can do it soon |
Reviewed By: MissMidajah On: March 06, 2003 09:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I think it's a good story but watch out. Bulma maybe love rough sex but don't you think that breaking legs is a little bit cruel. In my opinion you should write a Dialog between Bulma and Vegeta in which Bulma describs Vegeta why she don't like it that way. She is not as strong as Vegeta. And he should protect her and not hurt her. So I hope I gave you a few hints and please excuse my mistakes but I'm from Austria
Thanks and write soon |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE update!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: memellow On: March 04, 2003 05:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I liked closer I hope you wright more soon! |
Reviewed By: Hetchi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 18:49 CST
Comment/Review:
I love it. keep it coming |
Reviewed By: Rae On: February 08, 2003 15:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good fic can't wait to read more |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 07:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice one! Can't wait to see what's next. |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2003 09:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY SHIT!!!!! I will NEVER look at a broom the same way again!!!! That turned me on like whoa......this story KICKS ASS!!! I love that song by NIN.....Trent Reznor......ohhhhhh...ahem, lol, this fic rocks!!!! Update soon!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver_Sorceress On: February 11, 2003 09:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I never thought about a broom... I wonder where you got the idea... But continue on this way cause you got good ideas and they worth to be written down! Good job |
Reviewed By: Legana On: February 11, 2003 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe, cool!!
looking forward til the next chap!
hurry with updating!
love, Legana |
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