| "Closer" Reviews/Comments [ 44 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa,.......dude....that was harash O_O
But good at the same time.
CONTINUE SOOn
Vegeta isn't that cruel is he? ;__;
I think after he came back from Namek he was good enough to not...do that ^^"
But hey, it's a fic...and a great one at that
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 04, 2003 21:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oy I mean *whew* u got the sadist part nailed ! He's an SOB but I wouldnt have him any other way .
Update soon!!!!!!!!
Light bulb!
May be Bulma should make him feel pain too like um ... catching him with the ki dampers and then let that girl have fun with a whip I love when Geta has his dominance in a fic but I also enjoy when Bulma has her fun too I mean I read fics where she caughts him and the damper thingys shut down it kills all the fun you should have a Bulma sadist chap make him scream your name girl make him beg! thats what I would do! but anyway that my opinion.You Rock! Update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Gangsta By Natcha On: February 04, 2003 20:54 CST
Comment/Review:
go for it....this is a story thatz more original..GOD sappy stories where bulma ALWAYS sees the sweet, gentle side of vegeta are becoming cliche. we always need sum angst!! :P lol..i hope u continue! |
Reviewed By: Faye89 On: February 04, 2003 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gina can just go away, I love DBZ and I think the change of personality is great! Everyone has their own views and don't have to go by the storyline. I love it, great story. KEEP IT UP! |
Reviewed By: Gina On: February 04, 2003 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although the writing was well done, and the story plot would have been good it does not at all go along with anyone who has the slightest love for DBZ. Cause although Vegeta is mean he would never hurt his family. Surely if anyone watched the show it's obvious. He's a very protective father and loves Bulma even though he doesn't outright say it. I think you should drop the story and mind a more enjoyable and believable view of their relationship. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 13:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree with the person above me. great story though keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto On: February 04, 2003 12:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Uh.. yeah... i think she could stand some time in therapy. Lost of abused women think like that.. and it's never the truth. Not to mention a very thin line seperates genious and dementia. Good story. |
Reviewed By: Jackie On: February 04, 2003 18:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue with this story. I like
B/V stories as much as anyone and seeing a dark
side to their realtionship is a good change of pace. Ignore those who say this is ooc.First this is a fanfic. Second Vegeta was a cold blooded, sadistic person bent on killing when
he first arrived on earth.I'd say fics with him
acting all caring and somewhat nice to bulma,when they first met is more ooc. Anyway write more Chapters !! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Closer On: February 04, 2003 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think you should continue. Its a portrayel of b/v that you don't very often see and I for one think its interesting. Please continue. Later! |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 11, 2003 16:44 CST
Comment/Review:
*Bows along with Wayne and Garf* Were not worthy were not worthy!! A broom!! MMMMM! *hentai grin* YEAH!! BABY!! God I need a cold shower and a smoke and I dont smoke BAD TINA!
Cant wait for whats next!
Keep it up ~! |
Reviewed By: Legana On: February 07, 2003 11:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sob*
that was so sad...
why did she leave?
terrible.....
cannot wait until the next chapter!!!
Love, me! |
Reviewed By: nsbvegeta On: February 07, 2003 11:56 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniff* Damn it! chap 2 is great Keep it coming this is getting goood!.
UPDATE SOONNNN! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 08:26 CST
Comment/Review:
You left me hangin' with that last conversation btwn them. Ahhh, cant' wait to see what happens next. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 10:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh no this is getting good want more please update more. keep up the good work though |
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