| "The Master Becomes the Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lauryn On: August 19, 2003 19:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another chapter! I really love this fanficcy and I hope you continue soon :) Very original. Yucky aliens though!! I hope things turn out ok for Kakarotto! I'd hate for the rest of that food to go to waste, hehe! |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: August 19, 2003 16:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
< i cant wait to read what happens to Kakarot. write again soon please.(GREAT STORY) > |
Reviewed By: Zani On: August 19, 2003 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeaaaaassssssseeeeee continue the story. I promise I'll review just dont leave it like that for too long.
Will Goku fight back? Will Vegita save him? Will the awful orange jello have it's way with one of my favorite Saiyans. Please I've got to know. I'll just die if you take too long to update.
X__X |
Reviewed By: out92 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 15:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its an enjoyable read, i can't wait for more of it to come out....:) |
Reviewed By: GreenEyes276 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 00:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this story! *shivers* Yucky alien jellow swollowing my Goku!!! MORE!!!!! =o) |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2003 23:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
Noooo! The jello is eating Goku!!! Please, update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Dark Kavora On: August 18, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey luv the story. i cant wait to read what happens to goku. write again soon |
Reviewed By: VegetazGrl On: August 13, 2003 22:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I so loved this fic, it was so cute!!! I really hope u update soon cause itz such a good fic!!! I absolutely loved it and I hope u enjoyed writing it as much as I did reading it!!! Update soon...I'll b back |
Reviewed By: xene On: August 13, 2003 10:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aw comeon please write on I want to know how it ends! The Story is great so far! |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: July 18, 2003 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi, Kaia, don't give up this sweet fic, please. I like the interaction of both, they are very typical and sweet to observe. I look forward to Geta testing the strength of his new slave, does Kakarott wear an anti-ki-collar? Well, please, get out the next chapter sooner and show us more of this cute pair. |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 14:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
*looks back up at other reviews* jeese... no wonder you don't update.... i wouldn't either if i had people calling me things like that and being so rude. *glares at people and pulls out gunblade* you had better be nice or she may never update!! i wanna see what happens too, but you gotta be nice if you want more chapters!! *hmph!* |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 14:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow! this is awsome! i really like the start of this and the whole 'master, slave' thing! =^_~= i hope you continue with this, i'd like to see the story unfold more! |
Reviewed By: KCbakeneko On: July 12, 2003 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful fic, I love the character play and you've managed to keep them both in character even including their new experiences. I look forward to new chapters. :) KC |
Reviewed By: arovak On: July 12, 2003 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!I luv the evrything about the story,its great! write soon please |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: July 12, 2003 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
yay! you did update!
that's great! please don't be late on the next one i'm dying to read more... please ^^? |
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