| "The Master Becomes the Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2006 07:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I find this story truly interesting especially with all these rules that everyones suppose to follow. I really hope you write more soon, you're doing a great job.
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Reviewed By: Webtester01 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 00:40 CST
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This story gets more and more interesting. I have read it several times over the last couple of years and I continue to enjoy it. I look forward to your next update.
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yeah, that was a short chap, and I guess I can't complain about the lack of updates, I don't think I've updated mine in over a year. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: Kaoru27 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 00:07 CST
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you really need to keep this story going. i will be very sad if it ends or if you just dont want to finish it. please please please update soon. when are vegeta and goku going to lose control? please update!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2005 21:26 CST
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I must be one of the luckiest girls. Suddenly people are updating previously abandoned fics. Imagine that! Your right the chapter was too short. So you are just going to have to update again. *is waiting* lol Looking forward to hearing from Zarbon and when Freeza might again rear his ugly head. hmmm. Thank You for writing -El-
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2004 16:02 CST
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Hey, good those were some good chapters. please update asap.ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 23:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Please don't stop here. I've come to really appreciate yaoi and you're doing a great job. I want to know what Zarbon is planning. Is this wimpy Goku ever going to become the fighter we know? Sheared dreams... yeah!!!! I like the premise. How did Goku come to be a slave? Was his ship intercepted en route to Earth or was he kidnapped from Earth after the infamous bump on his head? Hentai minds need to know.
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2004 14:09 CDT
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Hey, I'm waiting for an update, you were doing really good at updating there for awhile, and I understand about the complications, I'm having major ones myself, but please update asap. Ja'ne
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Reviewed By: lee-lee On: April 25, 2004 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story its funny and exciting. Please update soon.
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Title: Great Work
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: April 21, 2004 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, you're doing a great job with this fic despite the complications that I know so often arise, anyways I really like this fic although it may be a pain to you, please update soon. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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Reviewed By: PiccoloLover #? On: March 13, 2004 07:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Me likey! More, please!!!
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Reviewed By: mOOferZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 00:27 CST
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this is a VERY good fic!! please hurry and update soon!!! i'm dying to know what will happen next! ^_^
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: December 09, 2003 11:49 CST
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whew, i think i need a shower. Keep up the good work. Chow Babe ;)
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Reviewed By: Fan007 On: December 08, 2003 22:20 CST
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I've been following this fic for awhile now and have been loving it... But I was surprised you made Goku the seme in that lemon. The personality you've given him up to this point pointed to uke o.O. Ah well. Tis your fic. I do hope the roles will be switched in future lemons though. I always saw Vegeta as a seme anywayz.
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Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: November 09, 2003 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would like to appologize for the former bad comments, I just get impatient, heh heh heh. Anyways, great work, and keep it up. I understand complications come up, and it's really undesireable to work them out when you don't like the fic that they belong to, but it is a good fic, so, please try. Ja'ne Koaitan Princess
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