| "The Master Becomes the Slave" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 18:04 CDT
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Well, you've piqued my interest, I look forward to seeing how Vegeta's new slave does :D |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 15, 2003 14:21 CDT
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BAKA!!!!!!!GRRRRRRRRRRRR.You haven't updated since Feb, and you only have one chapter up, a short one at that! Kuso. What the hell's up with you? Are you trying to lose readers? I mean it's a great start to a fanfic, but you seriously need to update! Goddamnd bakayaro! I'm seriously getting tired of waiting! And I have no patients as it is, so, HURRY UP!
Mate ne
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Koaitan Princess On: June 12, 2003 14:03 CDT
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Kisama! You haven't updated since Febuary! What's up with that? And what's worse, you only have one chapter up. What the hell's going on? Bakayaro, update soon. Got it?
Koaitan Princess |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: June 10, 2003 18:39 CDT
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UPDATE PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: van On: June 03, 2003 14:21 CDT
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Update! |
Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess On: May 08, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, update, please.UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!! please. = )
Saiyan Princess |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn S. On: February 09, 2003 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope there is more. i like your storytelling |
Reviewed By: nene On: February 05, 2003 05:26 CST
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sounds promising to me.
Kep writing.
I love Vegeta/Goku-Kakarott. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2003 05:08 CST
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:whimpers and paws at author's leg: More? More? You gave us just enough to be enticing! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 21:37 CST
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Oooooo! This is looking very good so far! Can't wait to read more :) Good job! |
Reviewed By: Lady Kasai [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 18:08 CST
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Aw, that sounds really good so far! I think you keeping the actual truth from vegeta was pretty original.. I'd like to see how this plays out! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 16:07 CDT
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I'm embarassed that I read this story along with several others of yours quite a while back and didn't review. O.o Sorry. This really is good. I hope you plan on continuing it. |
Reviewed By: Chanchan On: August 25, 2003 10:16 CDT
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Now Kaia, why don't you like this story? I find it very amusing. I do hope that you will continue it. |
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