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| "Never No Answer" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] | | Pages (6): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 › » ] | Title: thandie
Reviewed By: thandie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:18 CDT
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Ehm, sorry i wrote in the wrong chapter!!! Hey, i alreay reviewed never no answer, didn't i? I must stop using the cronology pages...
| Title: thandie
Reviewed By: thandie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2004 09:16 CDT
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what a beautiful long chapter! you know, i find it hard to like this story cause it's taking time from saiyuki!!!! But i must admit that it's a very articulated story, and i'm really starting to like it! Btw am i the only one that think Shuldigh is the sexiest character in the series? Good work as always!
| Reviewed By: Cath K On: October 08, 2004 19:46 CDT
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Oh wow! I'm really glad I checked your other stories. I love Gojyo x Sanzo! This has really snagged my undivided attention. All the angst and Sanzo-torture (which I really can't complain about), with the different POVs, the great humor, and steamy lemons, other than sleep I couldn't bring myself to stop reading for much longer than a short break here and there (and really only to take care of physical necessities like food) since yesterday. I love your characterizations. Reading Gojyo's POV is a blast, especially in the last chapter. The entire thing was so engaging and fun to read! I dare say, I'm enjoying this even more than Come As You Are. I hope you won't wait too long in working to update this one! Fanart for you story, if I felt I could do it decently, I'd give to you in a second! It certainly deserves some.
| Reviewed By: inuyashas honey [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2004 13:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are almost no words to describe how I feel about this story. But let's see what I can come up with. When I read your story I feel like I'm in the story. The amount of time and detail you put into your story is excellent. It draws the reader in, and I am deffinatley drawn in. The story is excellent. You have captured the essence of each and every character. Reading your story is actually better than watching the show, and I've seen the entire first season. usually when I see a story with short chapters I won't even bother to read them. Short chapters mean no detail. I wasn't sure what to think when I saw how long your chapter were. But I was pleasently suprised. Your story has just ranked #1 on my favorite stories list. It's exciting, sexy, dark, humorous, and eveything else it takes to make a great story. Famoninal job. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens with the priest and the bed warmer. :)
| Reviewed By: DirtyD On: September 26, 2004 01:31 CDT
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First the pros, your writing is extremely exquisite, descriptive without being too exuberant. There were times when I wished it wasn't so just for the purpose of discovering what was next. Another plus, the story was entrancing, I cursed long chapters because I NEEDED to know what was coming. Though I'm glad the story was told in bulks, I was treated to three days of an excellent read. Cons, yes some things were... upsetting? I was bothered by a few things in the story. Like how Sanzo-centric this is. I have only read three of the mangas and seen up to episode 14 but Gojyo, Hakkai and Goku all were protrayed as if their only purpose on the journey was to proctect Sanzo. Is that part of the actual story or is that something of your making? Either way it was bit annoying. Not to mention that during that fight with berserker Goku, Gojyo went down with like one hit and Sanzo took like 100. (Okay that was blatant exaggeration.) Not that I'm asking you to change it or that it even matters but I'm explaining what I enjoyed and what put a damper on the story in my opinion. As last note although I don't like Hakkai's new atitude, the catfight that is sure to ensude between Gojyo and him is something I'm looking VERY forward too. Fight you bitches!
| Reviewed By: thandie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW, the situation keeps 'improving'!!! The part where Sanzo and Gojyo are on the bed, 'talking', it's one of the pieces i like the most in all the story arc!!! Sanzo losing a glare contest...that's too much! i loved it, really. Now u must make me happy and write the following chapter...u got me hooked up! *thinking about a pic involving scene said above*
| Reviewed By: thandie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 17:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW, the situation keeps 'improving'!!! The part where Sanzo and Gojyo are on the bed, 'talking', it's one of the pieces i like the most in all the story arc!!! Sanzo losing a glare contest...that's too much! i loved it, really. Now u must make me happy and write the following chapter...u got me hooked up! *thinking about a pic involving scene said above*
| Reviewed By: Lady Gackt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2004 03:37 CDT
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This chapter was so... good. Hehe, I just don't have a word for it. "Goku paused in the middle of trying to shove a meat bun down his throat without actually swallowing" I had to bite my lip to keep from laughing out loud (with people around me) when I read that line. Not to mention when we find out Sanzo had kicked Gojyo under the chin with his bare foot! I guess the mental image I get of that is just too comical. Your descriptions are always so great. All those Gojyo/Sanzo moments were especially nice, from the oh-so-hot sex to those really touching (I can't really call them anything but) moments of Sanzo clutching at Gojyo to hide his tears, the tickling, and Sanzo's surprising request at the end of the chapter. And getting to hear all of Gojyo's thoughts during the meal and witnessing his antics at competing for Sanzo's favors was just too entertaining! If I keep going, I'll just be rambling. All together an extremely satisfying chapter... and yet just leaves me wanting more! Love this story!
| Reviewed By: Jenna Muff On: September 20, 2004 02:57 CDT
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Ohmagod, ohmagod. Yet another mind-blowingly fantastic chapter! We have Gojyo and Sanzo gettin' their freak on. We have Hakkai and Gojyo pissin' each other off. We have Sanzo molestation (the good kind and the panic-attack kind). Ladies and gents, we have a Freaking Wicked-Ass Chapter. Yay for Sanzo deciding he's had enough! All right for kanji'd bullets! I'll be waiting for the next update--thou rockest my itty bitty world!
| Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: September 19, 2004 02:03 CDT
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I love you. This is an excellent piece of work. I especially love the way you portray Sanzo's relationship with Goku. It's much better and more realistic than any strange romantic relationship between them. Keep writing!
| Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: September 18, 2004 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Again, you have taken the gold with this one. I just love this fic. Goyjo x Sanzo is one of my favorite pairings and you are doing such a great job here. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Flamingol() On: September 17, 2004 21:45 CDT
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Have I told you lately how much I adore this ficcie? Excellent chapter, one of my favorites so far! You wrote Hakkai's complex and possessive reactions really well; I can easily picture him with barely disguised hatred for Gojyo (*cheers* Yay! He got another piece of priest-ass!) I'm also loving Sanzo's unpredictability...you had me laughing my ass off with the image of Gojyo tickling a 'giggling' Sanzo. My god, I would seriously pay good money to see that *slips you a 50 dollar bill*. And, I have to say my jaw nearly hit the floor when Sanzo had Gojyo stay behind when he was getting sick in the bathroom...can't wait to see what transpires *crosses fingers for Gojyo*. Doing a lovely job, always looking forward to more!
| Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 17:51 CDT
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I'm the reigning champion? Phat! So, what can I say about this chapter? Nothing, other than it F-ing rocked. Gojyo/Sanzo goodness, Goyjo smartassness to Hakkai (If this is a prelude of what's to come, I can't wait) and just goodness all around. I love Gojyo acting all possessive. Waiting anxiously for more.
| Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: September 08, 2004 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god this is the best fic ever! Don't you dare stop!
| Reviewed By: thandie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 04:47 CDT
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Omg, its really becoming hard to wait for u to update...this story gets better and better, and i think you are improving your writing style, and, like, getting to really know the characters, this is becoming my fave fic!!Btw i'm making a huge pic inspired by NNA, it'll still take me some time, but i hope to have it done soon. For now: keep up the wnderful work!!!
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