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Title: Sequal! Now!
Reviewed By: Kiba-Chan On: January 11, 2005 18:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I havent been this absorbed in a read since HarryPotter! I couldn't sleep until I finished this. I cant believe how amazingly, beauitufly and PERFECTLY you kept EVERYONE in character! They seemed even more developed than in the manga. I dont know how you did it, but each character somehow became so much deeper and more mysterious in your story... I noticed MAYBE ten spelling and grammer mistakes in the entire thing, which is saying something considering how many words you have here. The style of writing improves 200% over the course of the story, until the final chapter is well crafted enough for a published work. And the plot! When I read the first few chapters I was apprehenisve, because most of the rape stories Ive read are about mindless sex, but you tied in this amazing psycological battle, so well crafted between the four characters. And even your madeup characters were perfect! I love how you can tie in juicy smut without letting it take control of your story, while the plot never misses a beat or grows stale for a second. My only complaint is that I wanted to see a bit more Gojyo/Hakkai tension... you kinda gave hints that they had a sexual history, and I was dying for Hakkai to get jealous over Gojyo. I like that Hakkai has a thing for Sanzo, But I can't say how much I wanted him to have some embarassing confession when the standoff happens b/n Goj and him, I had the whole thing played out in my mind. Its so hard to find a decent Gojyo/Sanzo fic... keep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Nyght Silverstream [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2004 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I wish I'd been able to review far more often. I never did, at least I don't think. I did try on a few chapters, but my computer was acting up and wouldn't bring up the screen. All I must say is thank you so much for a wonderful fic of Gojyo and Sanzo, these things are as rare as mummified ducks dipped in chocolate and glazed in caramel. I'm more than happy having read this, and do hope that you write more fanfics, even if not on this particular one! I think this was a beautiful ending, even if you never continue. I might just go crazy and got back to each and every one of your past chapters and leave what I thought on them there!
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Reviewed By: Cath K On: December 13, 2004 08:01 CST
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I can't believe this is the end! I hadn't been expecting it at all! *choke* But damn, I love Gojyo's "how-to-lay-Sanzo" ideas. ^.^ Delicious. And Sanzo's soft moment of admission to his fear really made my heart ache. I loved the ending. Who would have guessed these two would leave me feeling so warm and fuzzed. ^^ I'm so glad to hear there will be a sequel. And I can't help but imagine the wicked things Gojyo can do to Sanzo now that he's acquired those bottles of "medication". Clever, clever kappa. I enjoyed this entire story so much! It may be my favorite Saiyuki story ever. Never wanted it to end, so I'm really looking forward to the next. Thank you so much for writing! I adore you...
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Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: December 12, 2004 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
No, not the end! I loved this story even more than you're WK fics (and that's saying a lot!) Please continue with this fandom - there just aren't a lot of good Sanzo-as-uke writers out there. You have the great smut and a plot! How cool is that? I'll be watching for your next fic!
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Reviewed By: thandie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2004 08:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think u can see from the rating that im just a little happy with your fic...but now i'm so sad it's over...will u be a good girl and write a 'sequel'?! Btw, sequel or not, i so loved your fic, it's the one i liked the most among all the fics i've read! Your characterization is the best, and u managed to give hakkai an interesting and insightful one! I think u're the only one that managed to do that. I'd just love to read more cause there's so much to say if u would like to continue...about hakkai in the first place. the end was so unfair to him ...oh my i'm starting to like hakkai..what did u do to me!!? Wonderful work, and every chapter u write u improve. im already waiting for your next upload :)
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Reviewed By: rabidfan1 On: December 10, 2004 23:37 CST
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happy happy happy... Wonderful! The character development from beginning to finish was so real. Please continue for your own sake as well as your devoted readers. Hey, you still haven't used any of those bottles yet....
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2004 12:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*contented sigh* No, wait! I want more! You definitely must do a follow up to this story...pretty please, with sugar and bishies on top? Especially now that Gojyo has mananged to break through Sanzo's protective wall. There are so many angst possibilities here...angst that leads to nice, cozy making up...but I digress. The was an outstanding story, just like everything you write. I am in awe over your talent and I look forward to more. Now, get going with Weiss. *sits patiently at computer waiting*
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Reviewed By: neuroticsquirrel On: November 22, 2004 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh this just gets better and better! But what about the ghosts? The suspense is killing me! Will Sanzo exorcise them already? Oooo will he get 'possessed' again? Poor Hakkai. I forget if the others know about Kanan or not. Do they? PS: Lovely smut, as usual.
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Reviewed By: DirtyD On: November 20, 2004 21:38 CST
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LOL. The way Sanzo asked for sex in the beginning is still tickling my funny bone. He'll never come out and ask for anything will he? I loved the scene when Sanzo got so jealous he gave Gojyo oral sex out of spite. That was too rich! Your newest installment was such a humorous drama, not that the story as a whole isn't. Though Sanzo getting indignant over Goku trying to make him eat, then Sanzo try to talk to Goku, THEN having Goku verbally beat him into submission was truly priceless! After this one does wonder if Goku doesn't have more upstairs then he lets on. I had very few gripes with this chapter... other then Hakkai acting like a weeping woman. Ahhh I said it! I know you mentioned your trouble with Hakkai, understandable. Though I have to admit, I am laughing about attacking your Hakkai again. I'm not doing to be vicious or mean I assure you. The fight between Gojyo and Hakkai was under written and short that it was slightly disappointing since I was looking forward to it. On a ending note I am a little harsher on you then most because of your obvious talents, feel complimented not insulted.
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Reviewed By: inuyashas honey [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2004 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I literaly jumped for joy when I got the update email. I am so glad you finally updated, and it was well worth the wait. But, like you could ever write anything bad. And don't worry you did a great job as usual portraying Hakkai. And I like the quirky relationship you have between Sanzo and Gojyo. Or maybe it's more disfunctional than quirky, well whatever it is I like it. I'm looking forward to your next update. Please don't keep us waiting another 2 months.
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Reviewed By: rabidfan1 On: November 20, 2004 09:20 CST
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Goodie! I'm so glad you've updated. I check every time I'm online. This chap's a real good one too. Keep it up for your readers' sake.
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Reviewed By: evilkat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2004 18:08 CST
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Woo Hoo! An update! Awesome chapter. Great job delving into Sanzo's complexities. Your reasonings behind his abrasive and self-deprecating tendencies were very thought out. I think I would have liked Gojyo and Hakkai to go a few rounds before Sanzo broke them up, but this was such a superb chapter I can't complain too much. And yes, bring on some more smut!
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Title: GREATINCREDIBLEEXCELLENT(anything thats good)
Reviewed By: Azure Sea On: November 08, 2004 03:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say it's really GOOOOOOD.
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Reviewed By: rabidfan1 On: October 29, 2004 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Incredible. I read this fic everyday. You've got me hooked. Now you've got to be responsible for my obession. You've got to update and keep on writing. DON'T GIVE UP!!! Ever!
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Title: OMG! XD
Reviewed By: kireiaoshinari00 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 13:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this has been an awesome story thus far ^_^. i cant wait for you to update. hopfully itll be soon XD
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