| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: =) On: February 28, 2003 16:19 EST
Comment/Review:
wow! this is great! this story just gets better and better ^_^ hahaha i can't seem to stop myself from reading when i start and no the time change doesn't bother/confuse me. can't wait for the next chapter!! hee hee i wonder which sweet food will set them off again...hahhahaa |
Reviewed By: Mae_Aloril [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 01:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Honestly, this is one of the best fics Ive found yet.. definately in my top ten.. five even. You style of writing, language and sardonic wit is refreshing. Id call it almost Daria-esque, but you definately have your own way about it. Its way ooc but thats completely overlookable..I wonder if thats even a word. In any case, please hurry and continue! I cannot wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 10:59 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This Teaser is great, Volpa. I was waiting for the next present time installment! I can't wait for the real deal! |
Reviewed By: HI On: February 23, 2003 00:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it though I am a little confused with the two worlds, like how come Kagome not remember Sesshomaru from the past and how does he go back in time too? Also, what happened to Sango, Miroku, andShippou? It's a really great story though, I'm just a little confused maybe u can clear that up in the next chappy though. :) |
Reviewed By: Me.. On: March 11, 2003 13:04 EST
Comment/Review:
HEY!!! I haven't seen the l8est chappie at ffnet....why???
anyways, it's really quite a shock to think that Aya is Seiji's mom.....and Kazuo is her dad? or husband? hmm.....What a shock |
Reviewed By: Mala On: February 21, 2003 19:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the fic alot, Keep updating!!! |
Reviewed By: Emma_D [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 11:20 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.. this is really cool... your a cool writer so you better write more soon! |
Reviewed By: Nicole (otherwise known as SilverQuick on ff.net.) On: February 16, 2003 16:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The amusement of this fic abounds. I love the humor. Chirpy McSqueal.. hehe, god I laughed. I got a literal kick out of the kiss scene. And then they pulled back after the hot steamy mind shattering kiss and... "How is your wound." It just ammused my immensly for some reason. This has become one of my favorite fics. Right up in the top 9. ::nods:: I lookd foreward to more. |
Reviewed By: Obscured On: February 09, 2003 00:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story you've got going here. 10's all the way.
Please don't give up on this fic I'd really like to see where you go from here.
Take care. |
Reviewed By: Lizzycat On: February 09, 2003 03:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is really good so far. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Ericedwyn On: February 09, 2003 15:18 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greetings,
I think that you can handle the challenge that you have set up for yourself. I think you might even enjoy the spurring of ideas from what you started and I cannot wait to see what path you will take.
I greatly look forward to your next step. |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 20:36 EST
Comment/Review:
That has to be the best reason ever why Sess never smiles! *giggles* It's so true! Great chapter, can't wait for more!
*wanders off muttering about amorous females she has to kill off to keep Sesshomaru...* |
Reviewed By: Shisou [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 12:20 EST
Comment/Review:
This fic has nearly made me late for work. ^_^ I've also been getting odd looks and a few glares from my guinea pig. She thinks I need to stop laughing and pull myself together.
I'm definately looking foward to more. You're doing a wonderful job! |
Reviewed By: sesshoumaru lover On: February 11, 2003 19:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so sorry! I would have reviewed after the last
chappy but I am ground. o.O
my parents aren't home so I am trying to caught up
on what I missed. *shhhhh do tell anyone!!!*
*Hears door opening*
OH NO!!!!
MY MOM GOT TO GO,BYE!!!!!!!
p.s
PLEEEEEASE CONTINUE THE STORY!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AzureDragoness On: February 11, 2003 19:49 EST
Comment/Review:
BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep writing or I will duct-tape you to a chair and force you to under penalty of having to clean my room!!!!!!!!!
-The crazed dragon |
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