| "This Mess We're In" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 16:34 EST
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THIS STORY ROCKS! Do you have any more to recommend?
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 20:22 EST
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ohohohoho Fluffy, such arrogance! Jaken is actually a little bit compassionate, it was so nice that he hugged Rin! GREAT CHAPTER! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 17:54 EST
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ooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhh.......COOL!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 17:33 EST
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OMG that was so sad. Poor Higurashi-san! It must be torher for her to never know how her daughter is doing for months on end. THIS IS SUCH A GOOD STORY!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune_Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2003 17:20 EST
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THIS STORY IS SOOOOOO COOL! IT'S ONE OF MY ALL-TIME FAVORITES! I LOVED Ch. 5! The fight scenes were AWESOME!
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Reviewed By: Squishy-chan On: November 23, 2003 14:03 EST
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Sesshy-kun would be proud! You write his attitude so well!!!! YOU ROCK!!!!!!!! ^__^v update soon please! -squishy
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Reviewed By: SilentStalker66 On: November 23, 2003 14:01 EST
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awesome awesome awesome AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this story!!!! ^__^ update soon!!!!!
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Title: good idea
Reviewed By: lina 2 On: November 21, 2003 17:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your fanfic. i like the idea you have of there being a past and present. i cant wait for the next chapter to come out!!
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Reviewed By: Tiffinie On: November 16, 2003 03:07 EST
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Hi, I loved it.I haven't laughted so much in so long.I just had my tonsils taken out and I had to work hard not to laugh to hard or I would hurt myself, but it was worth it.I hope Hojo and Yuka get together,though.He is just what she's looking for.Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: YaisaKitty On: November 11, 2003 16:31 EST
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*blows bunches of kisses* ehehe! I wuv you! Your awesome writing style does Sess-sama proud! your fanfics are the greatest to read ^_^ everything flows really well and I love the interaction between Sesshou and Kagome ^_~ heh, good job on that nice little dream Sess and Kags had *grins* you allowed their relationship to continue to develop in a nice healthy manner and at the same time ya gave the readers a little citrus -^_^- keep up the pertiful writing ^^ and please please PLEASE post the next chappie soon ^_^
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Reviewed By: Heninu On: November 10, 2003 17:40 EST
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Ack I am getting deprived. Please update update update.
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: karenebl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 21:21 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've spent two days thinking about why I like this fic. Yes, yes the sex is great (did I say that?) but I am really starting to care about these characters. Also the construction is neat. I loved the call back at the end of this chapter to the first scene. I liked the sniffing reference to the end of the previous chapter. I am curious to see how you bring the two timelines together and look forward to more chapters. Karen in CT
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Reviewed By: broken_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 17:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I nearly died laughing half way through the chapter. Only by a sheer force of will did I manage to stay alive long enough to finish reading the chapter and write this review. I so LOVE this fic, and it does NOT suck, no matter what anyone else tells you. In fact, point them out and I'll hurt them for saying something as braindead stupid as that. Well, not really. Not quite sure what I would do to someone over the internet. All well. Great chapter, as always, though I did still spot a few grammar and spelling mistakes, and there were a few things that could have been worded differently to make the chapter flow better. If you would like some help with it, just email me @ crash_and_burn48654@yahoo.com Later - broken_angel, a.k.a. Crash, a.k.a. Black Raven of Death
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Striking Falcon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 02:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SF: {::dancing around her stage::} Yay! She updated! Yay! Silver Fox: Oh no. Here she goes. For the love of God, don't do the- {::SF breaks into a happy dance/Funky Chicken crossover::} {::shakes his head and walks offstage::} SF: I'm so happy! I've waited all summer for this chapter! {::dance gets out of hand::} Silver Fox: {::he and Sesshou grab SF and drag her offstage::} Please update soon! I don't believe she'll stop unless you do!
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Reviewed By: lady_Midnight On: November 04, 2003 22:58 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am in love with this story. I first started reading it and forgot to write the name down, so several months later I'm still thinking about it. Low and behold I find it, I really can't wait for the next chapter. Hurry, but take all the time you need to make it as wonderful as the first chapters.
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