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| "The Adventures of Alan and Jamie" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 > » ] | Reviewed By: Ray-ge-chaos-seven [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2005 05:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
A good idea, well delivered, but miserably mispelled. A lot of different characters to like and I think (with a few grammar classes) you have a lot of potential. Keep up the good work and get a spell check program installed. :P
| Title: Sorry for a very long wait
Reviewed By: power of renamon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 12:19 CDT
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I like to say that i am writing a new chapter but i keep having problems on my flobbys that am losing the file all the time but now that i got a new one i won't have any problems. The next Chapter will be uploaded as soon as its finshed
| Reviewed By: Amy_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2005 18:46 CST
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Plz keep writing! I wanna know what happens to you guys and my favorite character Amy! See ya!
| Reviewed By: HyperMan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 12:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story, but you could really use an editor. I'll be more than happy to do that for you. My e-mail adress is in my profile.
| Title: Don't Stop Now
Reviewed By: Light Speed Hedgehog On: July 03, 2004 08:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's good that you fanaily updated on this story, but don't slow down now. Update more often, get to the part when they get to Station Square and Battle City. If the head boss is Gannadorf from the Zelda games,that'll be realy something. Again keep going and pick up the pace a bit. See ya man.
| Reviewed By: L On: July 03, 2004 08:05 CDT
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| Title: Any time soon
Reviewed By: Light Speed Hedgehog On: June 15, 2004 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're taking way to long to update now. I'm all out of ideas but you can still come up with something I'm sure. See if you can up date before school starts back or something. Keep up the good work man.
| Title: hurry up alan, i want to see more of your Fanfic!!
Reviewed By: Power_Of_Light On: April 05, 2004 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alan, Hi I Like Your Story, It cool of your battle with Rupert, Can You please hurry up on The next Fic Please?, Oh & I was Wondering To See If You Can put me into your Fanfictions of The Adventures Of Alan And Jamie, If You Can, Just Put In Daniel as the Charcter, & he'll like to have sonic's speed & Attacks if you can do that, & Also his weapon is Dual(Duel)Weapons, If You Can Do This, I'll Truly be Grateful & Add Your Charcters into My Fanfictions, & I Hope You'll Do My Charcter, & Can he Journey with You & the Gang? That'll be Great, See You & Defeat That Darkness! P.S is There Some connection between with You & Sakura In Your Fanfictions of her hugging you & That, Tell me will you Bye!
| Title: Waiting
Reviewed By: Light Speed Hedgehog On: April 02, 2004 17:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Still waiting for the next chapter. Let's see what happens when Alan and the others stand aganst Eggman and Marik. See if Alan and Sonic have super forms when they get all seven Chaos Emeralds Until then update
| Title: Update any time soon
Reviewed By: Light Speed Hedgehog On: March 10, 2004 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Been a little over a month now. I'm kind of running out of ideas so I will try to see if can come with any thing else until then update.
| Reviewed By: Hmph again. On: February 07, 2004 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you're happy, you've actually made something so bad, a friggin' graboid just spat it back out. (El Blanco starts making hacking noises) Look, buddy, it's against my policy to make flames, but really, some people just deserve them. I don't hate you (More than I hate the rest of the world) but please consider learning better grammar, spelling, punctuation, and...y'know...take some fuckin' notes in your English classes. Trust me, it helps. (El Blanco: (HACK!!!!!!)
| Reviewed By: Hmph. On: February 07, 2004 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
...El Blanco, eat this nice fic, will you? Please don't forget the illiterate reviewers and gawd-awful writing style of the author. (Shriek, rumble rumble, boom, roar, chomp) Thank you.
| Title: About time
Reviewed By: Future Auther On: February 06, 2004 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About time you updated. Now on to the tips. Don't forget Sakura's home town. If Alan gonna biomerge to mega later in the story, I'll leave you incharge of who he'll do it with. I,m kind of sencing a crush that Sakura has for Alan. I don't think you might go with this one, but it just a thougt I know from digimon seasons 1 and 2 Kari was the Child of light, but lets just say that Alan's light power is stronger than Kari's being the chosen and all, anyway maybe that vampire digimon known in japansess Vapmdemon can fight Alan with the little help of season 1 and 2, but like I said before, I don,t think you might take this tip, but thats up to you. Befor I go Have you read the Review I last put up look at the part where I said about your story being a game. Tell me what you thougt of the idea and maybe you can fit the Anime that added to the idea. I suposs somebody else got my future auther name so I will come with a nother P.O.S until just call me F.A.
| Reviewed By: legolas123 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 04:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alan is my best friend and a great author. Good work Alan
| Title: Time to shift this story in to high grear
Reviewed By: Viewtiful Joe On: January 14, 2004 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just to let you know I change my future auther name from Chris Redfield to Viewtiful Joe from the vedio game on the Nintendo Gamecube. And sorry if any one thinks I was trying to steal anyone else's name or auther name. Now on the the real deal. Lets get a nother chapter up and see what happens next cause it has been to long. I want to say on thing to you and everybody out there. If any one who is a Sailor Moon fans that are reading and injoying P.O.R.'s (Power of Renamon) story here, then check this out. If we had the Sailor Moon cast added in this story and made a video game out of it, it could be the most best game of the year, maybe more. Just immagin all the graphics with tamers slashing cards, Ash battling Team Rocket, catching clow cards, robattles, draggen ball action, duel monsters,and Sailor Scouts transforming and lets not for get the Final Fantasy RPG like gameplay. Hey Alan, if you want to tell me want you think about that kind of idea just tell me at the end of your next chapter.
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