| "Insensitive" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2003 04:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to drop you a note and say that I'm still in love with this one... Thank you for sharing it with us. *dries tears* |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 17:02 CST
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Well, you delivered on your promised "happy ending" - and yet avoided it being too cloying.
Asuka's voice on the answering machine and Aya's reaction to it were well done. Yohji was pretty quick to pick up on that.
Birman's and Omi's appearances provided a very nice 3rd party perspective.
Love the line about only humans being able to cry. |
Reviewed By: Kuroki Toshiko On: March 02, 2003 01:21 CST
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This fic almost made me cry, and I've never cried at a fic. I hope you continue this, because your an amazing writer and i would love to sse this problem played out more. |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 20:13 CST
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*sniffles* that was sooooo sweet!!! :)
More like this one, please? :) |
Reviewed By: kitten On: February 25, 2003 11:40 CST
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please please pleeeeeeease make it a happy ending!!? it's so sad... and good. stress on the "good". update soon! |
Reviewed By: Sardius [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thanks for writing this great fic. I thought the best scene so far was when Y and A was lying in the water bed looking up at the stars. That was so romantic and meaningful. I love how you wrote each of the characters, and it was so sad, the way how both of them couldnt admit their love. Very beautifully written.
Glad to know there is a happy ending! Otherwise, dont think I can handle any more angst. *blows nose* Please continue soon. |
Reviewed By: psychosnaz [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please do continue!! i want the Yohji POV too, and much more after! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 23:57 CST
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wow! that was angsty. really good though. i'm glad Youji knows he's being a bastard. shows he's not an idiot. I reeeeeally hope you continue this soon. |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 02:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*tears in her eyes* You better work up to that happy ending real soon, or I'll be going into angst-mood completely here...
Hurry up with the rest, please, please, please? :) |
Reviewed By: MookieNH [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2003 02:42 CST
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It seems as though Yohji is undergoing a bit of a change, but is not really recognizing what it is (or is refusing to acknowledge it). The ending was bittersweet, and I loved the dream Yohji had. |
Reviewed By: Aisha_Max [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 00:53 CST
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I agree, you need to write a Yohji POV. And a happy ending!! Pretty pleeease!!!!
It's a very good take on Aya. I have always seen him as that kind of person who when in love does anything for that person, even to an unhealthy state. I think you did a good job on the characters. I really want to see more of this sson. ^__^ |
Reviewed By: MiniMorr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 22:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The downsides of being in love... *sniffles*
And do a PoV for Yohji as well, and perhaps even make this a happy ending? *loves happy endings*
Anyway, this was really good and I really liked it! :) |
