| "Executive Orders" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 02, 2003 21:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think I liked this chapter... but I'm not sure. |
Reviewed By: mamasama On: August 30, 2003 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was great chapter . i liked howthey sort of talked about it and worked it out |
Reviewed By: Trai Boreanaz-Hunter On: August 20, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again ill say it...freakin amazing! please keep posting! |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: August 20, 2003 02:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
It happened again!I hate it when you go to submit it delay's and you press the button only to end up with 2 entries,sorry! |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: August 20, 2003 02:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally read non-yaoi stories but this one had so many reviews I read them and then read the story.They were right.This was really good and
it's not often Relena is a character I like.(It's not her but the way people make her out to be.)I love Heero as the 'woman-like' character and how Wufei was 'a girl's best friend' giving advice and a helping hand.Not to metion all the joke's he made and up front attitude.This was done very
well,good work!
Why then did I give the overall rating a 2?Because I was tried of seeing tens everywhere...you're making me jelous.;) |
Reviewed By: bishoonenlover On: August 20, 2003 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally read non-yaoi stories but this one had so many reviews I read them and then read the story.They were right.This was really good and
it's not often Relena is a character I like.(It's not her but the way people make her out to be.)I love Heero as the 'woman-like' character and how Wufei was 'a girl's best friend' giving advice and a helping hand.Not to metion all the joke's and up front attitude.This was done very
well,good work!
Why then did I give the ovrall rating a 2?Because I was tried of seeing tens everywhere...you're making me jelous.;) |
Reviewed By: Crittle On: August 18, 2003 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wahahaha! I love this story! |
Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 20:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
i love how u put wufei in this situation1 is her gonna get his girl? and is relena gonna get her man? this is to great for words! please write more soon! i can't wait! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the dialogue between the characters. It's intelligent and witty without being too perfect. They all really bounce off each other well. And Wufei's role as a "voyeuristic asshole" is pretty darn amusing.
Keep up the good work...hope you update soon. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: July 09, 2003 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think i need a cold shower after reading this.(fanning self) I never knew Heero had it in him.(HeHe)As always, loved the story and all the action.(pun intended)Keep your outragously great fanfics coming and i will definetly make a point to read them. Much love from one of your fans,me!!! ^_^!!! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: August 17, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yessssssssssssssssss. Another wonderful chapter. Keep up the *good* job. |
Reviewed By: sage On: June 12, 2003 17:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whee!! Love it, love it, love it!! It's funny, and cute, and hot! I can't wait for the next chappie! Bye-ya! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Pammy On: June 04, 2003 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO RELENA! And yes, Heero is abd influence on her...The best kind! Hot lemon. You've fogged up my computer screen. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Airen On: June 04, 2003 17:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I re-read this fanfic with an extremely amused smirk on my face. Heh heh heh...Dominatrix Relena is someone I've never encountered before in this fandom. Somebody's gotta keep that dark, sexy bad boy in line...::snaps whip::
I LOVED Wufei in this. Who'd have thought Mr. Prude could be such a little hentai? Heero owes him a new pair of special handcuffs, that's for damn sure.
Kudos to you for providing such unusual twists on traditional characters. Now that you've got a little plot going, I can't wait to see where you take this fic next. ^_~ |
Reviewed By: lizabee [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an excellent lemon!! and this story is getting better and better! more soon |
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