| "Surviving Together" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Aaaaah, Zarbon, you piece of shit!!!! I hate you! He has to die!!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 20:53 CST
Comment/Review:
This is too much for me okk!!!! *sniffsniff*
I cant take it shes so brave that greenfreak I hate Zarbon!!! I lothe the day I ever put him as a good guy in one of. ...... ummmm sorry but Goddanmit!! its not fucking fair!!!!!!!
Please update soon!!!!!
LATER!!! |
Reviewed By: Marajade187 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It's really original considering how over-done some plots can get. You've been really good with updating...must have more!!! o.o Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 22:07 CST
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YUP I WOULDD LOVVEEEEEEE DO DIE WHILE MAKING LOVCE WITH VEGETA !! I'll die the happiests woman on the earth!!
*YEAH BABAY!!!!*
Well I loved the Chapy Please Update soon !!
Later!!!!! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
That was an awesome chapter! Can't wait until the next one! |
Reviewed By: DarkBulma On: March 04, 2003 17:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man! Vegeta and Bulma are falling for each other. LoL Doing good so far keep it up! Can't wait til next chapter. Please update soon! Bye! Bye!
~^_-*~ |
Reviewed By: Kat On: March 04, 2003 17:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rascal On: March 05, 2003 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Some small spelling and grammar errors and it isn't very original but you have a nice way of telling a story and making your audience feel. Way to go! Write more, write often!
PS
I notice some reviewers gave you higher marks than I did. I use other fics I have read as a guide for my reviews. For me, Darke Angelus, Catgirl 26(Pseudo Ferocity) and Hella (An Alternate Love) are three of the best writers out there. (I have not read anything better than any of the fics Darke Angelus has written). Please look them up and read! You do a fine job, keep writing! |
Reviewed By: audreyt26 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Lemon! I've read this fic before and I was wondering if you had changed the lemon on this? Anyway, keep posting! |
Reviewed By: hellsing goddess On: February 27, 2003 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was the best thing i ever read about vegeta and bulma please please keep going i can,t wait to read what happens next! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*CLIFYYYY!!! DAMN UUU!!! AND NO LEMONNNNN* Sorry excuse my psycho self shes beign a bich today!*Fuck u* HA! Vegeta already has! :P*In your dreams* ENOUGH!
Sorry well I hope that nothing happens to my girl bulma man Shes in danger galore! Fuck !
Please update soon!
*AND GIVE THE LEMONNNNN IM DESPERATE*
SHUT UPP!
LAter! |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 16:54 CST
Comment/Review:
No, you cant end it there!! Errr, Update soon before I go insane. |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 16:54 CST
Comment/Review:
Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!!Update!! |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2003 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! Evil EVIL cliffie! Bulma just seems to have everyone against her! Please, please, please update asap! This fic is sooo good! |
Reviewed By: Yuffie lockheart [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2003 19:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE THIS FIC PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! |
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