| "Bittersweet reunion" Reviews/Comments [ 70 ] |
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 22:14 EDT
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Amazing, Beautiful, Heartwrenching. This fic hits every emotional chord. Your characters are dead on and you really should write more. So very few one-shots really capture emotion this well. It's a very visual piece. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Bri-chan
Reviewed By: hiei6272 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2004 22:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a fabulous fic. The first time i ever read this, i cried a single tear. It is written beautifully and is by far original. If i could give this any higher of a rating, i would give it a 100 in a heartbeat. You're a fantasic writer, and continue doing so ^_^ Many years in faithful writing for you, Bri-chan
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Title: star-brella
Reviewed By: Star-brella [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2004 13:04 EDT
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WOW, is all i can say about this fic! This is a true master piece, THIS IS perfection at it's best. I love how realistic it is. A very well written one-shot!!!!! Not like other peoples >:cough *mine* cough::< Very original and awsome idea behind it. Good work!!^_^
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Reviewed By: Catinhat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2004 21:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAA! that was so sad. but i have a question. What about Pan, goten, bra, marron, and trunk's children. at least one of them should have had kids that vegeta and goku have contact with, right?
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Title: OMG!
Reviewed By: shesshomaruluver1723 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2004 14:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that was sooooo good! wahhhhhhhhhh, it made me cry. * sniff* how sad. U r an amazing writer, I hope to see more from you in the future!
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2004 00:51 EDT
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HEHE this is InugirlTeen just currenty under RayGirls names. i decided to see wut my lil sis had under her faves. I happen to like this fic a lot. it is the first DBZ fic i've read and i was surprised to see that it was slightly sad. I loved it nontheless. please keep up your writting. You have a great talent.
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Title: you wrote this?
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 20:30 EDT
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Saw this on featured mm fics and have to say, I didn't take the author's name with me at the time--B, you can do this sort of thing? A lovely vignette. I so love the ironic title. debbiechan
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Reviewed By: JetMatthews [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2004 18:43 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I simply loved it. I loved the twist on the 'reunion'. Very descriptive- yet not to wordy. An outstanding piece of work. You just keep on wirtin'!
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Title: bittersweet
Reviewed By: fireash [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ack! i don't usually read dbz fanfics but this one had me choking up! it was beautiful and sweet. loved it.
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Reviewed By: foxfire9 (who isn't logged in) On: April 22, 2004 20:41 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is so sad and wonderful!!! I lovedc it!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: giggles101988 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 23:33 EST
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Wow! I like this. But it is so sad. (so very sad) But still great. Keep it up!!!
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Reviewed By: Gohana [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2004 01:33 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was wonderfully written! I was totally surprised that the 'reunion' was actually a visit to the graveyard--what a compelling twist! I think Vegeta's moment at Bulma's grave was the most powerful. By that one word "woman," you were able to convey the depth of his grief, and his love for Bulma.
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Reviewed By: Carla S. On: March 27, 2004 06:32 EST
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I know I left a review for this when you first posted it, but I was lurking around this morning and saw it again. I have read it at least a dozen times, and my eyes still get misty and my heart breaks into tiny little pieces. There is so much raw emotion packed into this tiny story. It's truly a beautiful piece of literature from a truly gifted author.
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Title: Bittersweet
Reviewed By: Jzara Sheer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 11:25 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I dunno WHY I read this AGAIN!. I'm a glutton for punishment I guess.. :(. Dag Girl this made me cry again. It's way beautiful...
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Reviewed By: RayGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 22:34 EST
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green Love it! I hope the HTML tag works. * hopes*
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