| "untitled 4now" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic update soon |
Reviewed By: demongal2453 On: April 21, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic! can u finish it tho?? cus its really good so far and i wanna no da endin, and ur da only 1 hu can rite it... |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 21:51 CDT
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I Started this new fanfic it's so crappy it's called the Apology. It's really stupid if you wanna read my chapter i'll let you be the first k? |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 21:50 CDT
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I Started this new fanfic it's so crappy it's called the Apology. It's really stupid if you wanna read my chapter i'll let you be the first k? |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 18, 2003 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, to respond to tat review written by gag wateva, i dun think tatz nice...i'm sure it wasn't meant to be nice but i think this story was GREAT no even better than tat! i juss can't think o' tha word rite now but this is tha greatest fan fic on inuyasha tat doesn't need a lot o' tha real story stuff in it maybe because it wasn't suppose to be NE thin' Like it maybe she was purposely tryin' to make it like tha fast an' tha furious. tha only reason i read this story was because i read tha lil' summary an' i was liek kewl itz a mall thin' an' then it turned out liek it was! i was juss like kewl! but i thot it shouldn't include ne o' tha real stuff in it because tha story isn't on tha REAL story itz on a biker story thin'. i juss thik itz kewl tha way it was written. ^-^ keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-KAy On: April 18, 2003 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i'm askin' u to update tha next chp. on this story because i like it an' i think u shoulda dropped tha who kaede thin' in tha last chp. an' juss put in sum lemon an' then went bak to miroku an' sango?!?!?!? itz juss a suggestion an' isn't this story suppose to be a biker/ hott car thin'?!?!?!? it was really funne an' extrememly kawaii(kute) in tha chp. before chp. 7. sry, no offense but i like ur idea of tha biker thin' an' miroku an' sango goin' to america an' tha fact tat kagome woke up in inuyasha's place but really i thought u shoulda dropped tha kaede thin' an' stuck to tha real story. HEY AN' UPDATE!!!! I LIKE THIS STORY SO DUN GET ME MAD! |
Reviewed By: Gwagagoo On: April 17, 2003 18:51 CDT
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ok it this your first fic so i won't be mad or angry but the little fast furious thing........................well it made me think about the people in this world and then i got sick. No offence but have you ever watched inuyasha. i am not saying you have to follow the story line or anything but come he is a half demon and sango is a demon hunter (her clan was killed ruthlessely by demons) chances are they would not be buying cars and fitting them up with 50-shots of NOS. This was not ment to be rude but i was just trying to tell you how it is. |
Reviewed By: where On: April 17, 2003 17:36 CDT
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Where is the lemon put it soon |
Reviewed By: lemon On: April 17, 2003 19:27 CDT
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where is the lemon come on you need to put that in soon |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 09:46 CDT
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You know you rock. I know this a stupid idea but how about we write a fic or something together. |
Reviewed By: utsukushi dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 00:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg this fic is great. Please update soon. I wanna know what happens next. Inu and Kag are such a cute couple. ~-^ |
Reviewed By: IYfan On: April 15, 2003 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was very sugio(cool).U better have written more chapters for this story, because its excellent!Better have an update! Or I will be forced to be annoying and asked "Have U finished the rest of the chapters yet". |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune On: April 14, 2003 14:48 CDT
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must...read...more...PLEEEEASEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2003 18:42 CDT
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Great this is great so far. Please continue. You know what i was going to do a sogfic with the tune to angel but it seems u got it first. Not a songfic but u got the song first.
Kilala36 |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 13, 2003 11:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love It! I Love It!!! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!!! I love this story, itz like so kewl! they have SPORTZ CARS and motorcycles!!! hehheheh.....so keep it up!! an' i'll be checkin' up on u!!! |
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