| "untitled 4now" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: March 06, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was reallllllllly good! I loved it, and i hope the next one shows up reallly soon!!!!! I can't wait! |
Reviewed By: gurl On: March 06, 2003 19:51 CST
Comment/Review:
update!!!!! |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey I really like your fic. I've never seen one about them racing before and it's really cool. I hope you continue writing and update soon.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: Meowm_ On: March 02, 2003 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty decent story. I gave your style of writing a seven because I can see you are good at describing your characters and activities, but some of the plot is a little hard to understand. The flahback in that last chapter made me a little confused what it was supposed to be talking about, and why it was important. Spelling and grammer... you could really work on this. In the first chapter you have Sango saying "4" and "u" instead of words. You frequently forgot punctuation, especially apostrophes and commmas. Capitalization wasn't always up to par. Creative... this is not. We've all read dozens of stories with the IY characters in high school. Creative the first few times, but not really a new idea. Enjoyment... It was ok to read, not the best, but still ok, so I gave you a good rating for this. Overall this is a decent story. If you worked more on grammer and punctuation, it would be much better though. And make it original, too! I like reading this. You described stuff very well. I just think you could've worked harder on this than what is apparent from what I've read here. |
Reviewed By: =^..^=inuaysha lover On: March 01, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought that it was kool and i cant wait to read your nets chapter. I personally like Kagome being like this instead of a wimp. |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey
I like the story please do continue. I will try and review each chapter but I get busy and sometimes have to run before i can. P lease keep writing it. |
Reviewed By: Mande On: February 28, 2003 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic,please update it soon!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ziana [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
i luv your story ^.^ PLEASE update soon!! *stares at the screen waiting for the next chapter to 'magically' appear* O.O |
Reviewed By: shudda On: February 28, 2003 03:09 CST
Comment/Review:
REAlly good story |
Reviewed By: jen On: February 27, 2003 19:10 CST
Comment/Review:
please finish. i like the chapter so far |
Reviewed By: Eclipse On: February 26, 2003 19:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man! Ilove it so far!Plllleeeaasseeeee write more SOON!Becauuussseee if you don't I WILL BE FORCED TO KILL YOU! |
Reviewed By: bbg On: February 23, 2003 19:42 CST
Comment/Review:
hey if you dont finish im gonna have a fit u know that rite so whats the hold up hurry up all ready |
Reviewed By: thedrawingfoo On: February 23, 2003 12:32 CST
Comment/Review:
I tink this is a good story so far!
Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: IF U DON'T On: March 27, 2003 12:33 CST
Comment/Review:
IF U DON'T UPDATE SOON PEAPLE WILL IGORNED UR STORY SO PLEASE PUT CHAP 7 UP |
Reviewed By: Eclipse On: March 16, 2003 11:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 5 was soooo good!Write MORE! You can't just end it like that! Its too much of a cliff hanger! WILL YOU EVER STOP TORTURING US?!*cough**cough*Okay I'm done :) |
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