| "untitled 4now" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Sai-chan On: March 15, 2003 23:46 CST
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NO!!!!! U HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!! U CAN'T END IT LIKE THAT!!!!!! U JUST HAVE TO WRITE MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: kangel On: March 15, 2003 21:26 CST
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this is a great story so far please update soon!!!! |
Reviewed By: Eclipse On: March 11, 2003 14:53 CST
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O.K!THATS IT! I love this story! I've reviewed this story 3 times already! THIS IS YOUR 19th REVIEW! WRITE MORE ASAP! I LOVE IT! |
Reviewed By: Jade On: March 09, 2003 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Will the next chapter be a M/S lemon? If so thats awsome but PLEASE have an Inu Kagome lemon too. PLEASE!!!!And HHHUUURRRYYYYY!!!!
-Jade |
Reviewed By: Eclipse On: March 09, 2003 19:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! This is your 17th review! Write more goddamnit! I.LOVE.IT! So update SOON!!!! |
Reviewed By: DragonballZZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story this is your 16th review so Continue!!
Ps: thanks for reviewing my story |
Reviewed By: Sarah On: March 06, 2003 23:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok here is the 15th review. So are u going to update? I like the story. |
Reviewed By: Step of Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 22:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i really like you story. So i hope you get 15 reviews well one review. I really like you story. |
Reviewed By: Dragon Girl On: March 06, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was reallllllllly good! I loved it, and i hope the next one shows up reallly soon!!!!! I can't wait! |
Reviewed By: gurl On: March 06, 2003 19:51 CST
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update!!!!! |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
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Hey I really like your fic. I've never seen one about them racing before and it's really cool. I hope you continue writing and update soon.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: Meowm_ On: March 02, 2003 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a pretty decent story. I gave your style of writing a seven because I can see you are good at describing your characters and activities, but some of the plot is a little hard to understand. The flahback in that last chapter made me a little confused what it was supposed to be talking about, and why it was important. Spelling and grammer... you could really work on this. In the first chapter you have Sango saying "4" and "u" instead of words. You frequently forgot punctuation, especially apostrophes and commmas. Capitalization wasn't always up to par. Creative... this is not. We've all read dozens of stories with the IY characters in high school. Creative the first few times, but not really a new idea. Enjoyment... It was ok to read, not the best, but still ok, so I gave you a good rating for this. Overall this is a decent story. If you worked more on grammer and punctuation, it would be much better though. And make it original, too! I like reading this. You described stuff very well. I just think you could've worked harder on this than what is apparent from what I've read here. |
Reviewed By: =^..^=inuaysha lover On: March 01, 2003 22:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i thought that it was kool and i cant wait to read your nets chapter. I personally like Kagome being like this instead of a wimp. |
Reviewed By: Zerianyu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2003 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey
I like the story please do continue. I will try and review each chapter but I get busy and sometimes have to run before i can. P lease keep writing it. |
Reviewed By: Mande On: February 28, 2003 17:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this fic,please update it soon!!!!!! |
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