| "untitled 4now" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kurro On: July 06, 2003 17:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
no offense but it just seems like you wrote it as a personall fantasy.....its too hard to follow because you dont relize you arent putting down what is in your head. I think you need to have a stranger or parent or friend read and ask questions about it. AN example is you didnt write why sango is afraid of planes you just said she told miroku a story. Either your lazy or you dont relize. |
Reviewed By: IY fan On: June 18, 2003 12:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU'RE SUPPOSE TO UPDATE MORE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: June 14, 2003 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm absolutely hating u for not updating this story! u kno wat i think so update! an' put tha next freakin' chapter up or i'm gonna be so mad at u!!!! i'll never visit this story again an' i swear i'll forget about it!! |
Reviewed By: snickie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2003 02:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I ABSOLUTELY love this fanfic... I hope you update soon, It's driving me crazy!!! |
Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I forgot the rating thingies. @_@ |
Reviewed By: Vagabond [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2003 12:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
hurry up with the next chapter! ^_^ I must read more *starts walking like frankenstein* |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 27, 2003 19:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it, an' i want u to update, soon! i dun really like ur otha fanfic tat u started, i'm sorry, i juss want u to update this one cuz i think itz excitin' an' really good tha way u wrote it. plz dun keep me under suspense. |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2003 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the fic update soon |
Reviewed By: demongal2453 On: April 21, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic! can u finish it tho?? cus its really good so far and i wanna no da endin, and ur da only 1 hu can rite it... |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 21:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
I Started this new fanfic it's so crappy it's called the Apology. It's really stupid if you wanna read my chapter i'll let you be the first k? |
Reviewed By: Kilala36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2003 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I Started this new fanfic it's so crappy it's called the Apology. It's really stupid if you wanna read my chapter i'll let you be the first k? |
Reviewed By: Kaye-Kay On: April 18, 2003 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, to respond to tat review written by gag wateva, i dun think tatz nice...i'm sure it wasn't meant to be nice but i think this story was GREAT no even better than tat! i juss can't think o' tha word rite now but this is tha greatest fan fic on inuyasha tat doesn't need a lot o' tha real story stuff in it maybe because it wasn't suppose to be NE thin' Like it maybe she was purposely tryin' to make it like tha fast an' tha furious. tha only reason i read this story was because i read tha lil' summary an' i was liek kewl itz a mall thin' an' then it turned out liek it was! i was juss like kewl! but i thot it shouldn't include ne o' tha real stuff in it because tha story isn't on tha REAL story itz on a biker story thin'. i juss thik itz kewl tha way it was written. ^-^ keep it up. |
Reviewed By: Kaye-KAy On: April 18, 2003 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i'm askin' u to update tha next chp. on this story because i like it an' i think u shoulda dropped tha who kaede thin' in tha last chp. an' juss put in sum lemon an' then went bak to miroku an' sango?!?!?!? itz juss a suggestion an' isn't this story suppose to be a biker/ hott car thin'?!?!?!? it was really funne an' extrememly kawaii(kute) in tha chp. before chp. 7. sry, no offense but i like ur idea of tha biker thin' an' miroku an' sango goin' to america an' tha fact tat kagome woke up in inuyasha's place but really i thought u shoulda dropped tha kaede thin' an' stuck to tha real story. HEY AN' UPDATE!!!! I LIKE THIS STORY SO DUN GET ME MAD! |
Reviewed By: Gwagagoo On: April 17, 2003 18:51 CDT
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ok it this your first fic so i won't be mad or angry but the little fast furious thing........................well it made me think about the people in this world and then i got sick. No offence but have you ever watched inuyasha. i am not saying you have to follow the story line or anything but come he is a half demon and sango is a demon hunter (her clan was killed ruthlessely by demons) chances are they would not be buying cars and fitting them up with 50-shots of NOS. This was not ment to be rude but i was just trying to tell you how it is. |
Reviewed By: where On: April 17, 2003 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Where is the lemon put it soon |
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